Ah! My first pic post!

[Autumn]

Heh, I drew this really long ago. Heh... *Sweatdrop* I'm open to comments and critism...

I accidentally put her left hand on the same side of the harp as her right, lol. My bad.



Hehe, it's supposed to be bigger, but the site I used resized it. Pooey. Just save it and resize it yourself! ^^

[Ben]

I promise you guys, you'll help yourselves out (quality wise) if just draw on some decent printing paper. These napkin, notebook paper mediums give me headaches. XD

As for the actual drawing, sakura, you did a good job with providing the dress with rich lines/texture. As you mentioned earlier, the left hand should be on the other side of the harp. I recommend you draw a light sketch next time so you can correct those errors easily with a regular eraser. Then go back over it with a darker shade of lead, graphite, or pen. Keep practicing! :)

[Azure]

Try runing it through Photoshops unsharp mask it may help. ^^ This is a lovely picture you've done a great job with the dress folds.

[Immortal Goat]

How long ago was it?

Oh, and the arms are a little long. Follow Ben's advice about the paper, and try some shading techniques. Shows promise.

[Autumn]

It was actually only about a year and a half ago! ^^; That's a while for me!

Thanks for I'll the tips you guys, I'll try to improve the picture, and maybe edit my post with the improved version. Don't count on it though.

I'm lazy. XP

[Icypopcorn]

It looks nice! I can't see it very well, but one thing I can see is her arms. They're very very long. XD If you stand up straight, then your fingertips should touch mid-thigh. This girl's arms go down past her knees o_o and her right arm is longer than the left.

Other than that, great job =3 Keep drawing.

[Hitomi]

It looks pretty neat! (Even though the arms are a bit wonky!) If you have photoshop, you should run it through there and make any edits without having to change the actual picture But keep it up, it looks great Ganbatte ne!

(oh, and btw, ESCAFLOWNE = #1!!! XD)