Outlaw Star-Hiro no Tsuki by MeiYi

[MeiYi]

Yes, my second post. Don't laugh at me cuz the high parts XD i did look our for the sharps but it didn't turn out THAT well.

Outlaw Star - Hiro no Tsuki

Please give me feedback. I'm new so i need all the feedback i can get. oh! and please leave comment if not a feedback. Anything is fine, nothing can hurt me

Thank You for listening!

[yukiko]

Well, I have never heard the original, so I can't really critique this. So I shall comment instead ^^

Why would we laugh at the high parts? It's so cute >.< KAWAII!!! HeHe, I loved it! CUTE CUTE CUTE!!!! Hmm... I think I shall go find the original, you got me into this song now xD

[Windy*]

Not bad, not bad at all.

I think your biggest downfall was pitch ^^; And your timing was a little rushed here and there; this is just a song you have to be very careful with when singing the rhythms o.o But do watch out for those notes, I think you were sharp often, yes, though flat a few times as well~ Not by much, but you don't want to get into the habit of ignoring even small problems because that's just careless and won't help you improve :3

Your recording quality is great, though, very clear and pretty *o* The reverb was nice, though you almost overpowered the music XD Considering how quiet this song is maybe lower your vocal volume just a bit~

Aaand I'm done. x3 Nice and sweet, this was pretty. ^o^ I've been singing this song for years now~

[ICD]

o *V* it's really pretty and delicate =]

however, as windy has pointed out... u really needa watch out your pitch. it is quite unstable and there are sharps and flats in the verse and chorus.

good job though, u did quite well

[TwilightWolf]

That was pretty good. Brings back memories of when I used to watch the show on tv. But yeah, when it comes to the crituqe and i'm going with what everyone else said. But still, very good singing.

[MeiYi]

Thank you for all your comments, i thought it was okay too. i didn't really give it my all. I recorded this one when my mouth was knub(sp?) from the dentist. XD
I kind of it got tired because it was little slow. I'm so enviouse that you guys know whats going on. one question....how old do you guys think i sound like? XP