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  1. #1 [BFPro] Sailor Moon Stars Fandub - Episode 200 (Parts B and C up!) 
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    Ok, this took me a long time, but it's finally available for everyone to see! Here is the entire episode uploaded! Please enjoy! This is the final SM Project I planned to do. I don't currently have plans to continue to episode 199 and under, sorry guys! Maybe sometime in the distant future I could consider doing more episodes, but for now the project is canceled.

    KStar couldn't do ep 200 B and C for unknown reasons (dead? dropped off the face of the planet? who knows)

    AnimeEyeshime couldn't continue her role either due to a small misunderstanding that was completely my fault

    Please feel free to critique!

    Stream:
    Part A
    Part B
    Part C

    Download:
    Part A - 12MB
    Parts B and C - 20MB


    Castlist:
    Usagi/Sailor Moon: KStar (Part A)
    Usagi/Sailor Moon: Berri (Parts B and C)
    Ami/Sailor Mercury: Scarlotte
    Rei/Sailor Mars: Gabi Star
    Makoto/Sailor Jupiter: Tinker_Jet
    Minako/Sailor Venus: Sachibelle
    Haruka/Sailor Uranus: Tinker_Jet
    Michiru/Sailor Neptune: Onlyawitnes
    Setsuna/Sailor Pluto: Dcgoddess3
    Hotaru/Sailor Saturn: HikaruKagaya
    Mamoru/Tuxedo Kamen: Sukisho
    Luna: lightofhope18
    Artemis: David Corson
    Seiya/Sailor Star Fighter: teggy16
    Yaten/Sailor Star Healer: Chinomi
    Taiki/Sailor Star Maker: Hideki
    Light of Hope: AnimeEyeshime (Part A)
    Chibi Chibi: KStar
    Princess Kakyuu: Eternal_Cosmos
    Galaxia: fruitfly
    Good Galaxia: Pandora (Parts B and C)
    Opening/Ending Theme Singer: princesssailormoon


    Production:
    Producer/Director: Blaze(me)
    Mixing: Blaze(me)
    Opening/Ending Theme Lyrics: Blaze(me)
    Music: Sailor Moon OST
    Sound Effects: Sailor Moon OST, sounddogs.com, Pookers77, original clip
    Textless Op/End: Shiaedoeu


    Special Thanks:
    KStar
    lemon_ice
    fruitfly
    angelic_layer_tamayo_fan
    George A.
    super
    x0Michellex0
    Berri
    teggy16

    ...for their previous reviews!
    Last edited by Myokei-kun; 07-15-2007 at 03:15 PM. Reason: Adding parts B and C

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  2. #2 Re: [DIBPro] Sailor Stars Fandub - Episode 200 Part A 
    Usagi Tsukino/KStar - You could have had more emotion ALOT more emotion.... Your screaming sounded sorta fake, and you could be higher for Usagi

    Galaxia/fruitfly - I love your Galaxia voice! I have no complaints...

    Light of Hope/AnimeEyeshime - It was a very good performace, but you pronounced Glaxia wrong XD

    Seiya Kou/teggy16 - Very good emotion ^^ I say your voice could be a little lower, but I liked it

    Singer/princesssailormoon - This was a okay performance I had no Idea that it was a fandub of the song at first it sounded really muffeled I couldn't undersdtand what you wear saying

    Mixing - Some voice flaps were off and when Galaxia was comeing twords sailor moon around 4:47 sounded sorta weird but otherwise it was very good!
     

  3. #3 Re: [DIBPro] Sailor Stars Fandub - Episode 200 Part A 
    Usagi / Kstar - Overall your performance was good, but as lemon ice said you
    could have gone higher, but i know its hard to get the exact
    high note for Usagi as not many people can reach it

    Fruitfly / Galaxia - Your voice suits her, you had awesome emotion
    Good Work

    Seiya / Teggy16 - Only had .. 2 lines I recall, you could have gone a bit lower
    but you had some preety good emotion thrown in there so
    ... yeh. good job.

    Light of Hope / AnimeEyeShime - As lemon ice said .. you did mis pronounce
    Galaxia, however your overall performance
    was good you had some good emotion
    and your voice blended well, Nice Work.

    OP / princesssailormoon - only really one problem which I encounted at the
    beginning of the song, which was I couldn't fully
    understand what you were saying but overall,
    Good job

    Mixing / BlazingFire456 - Nice work with the mixing, didn't really pick up on
    many mishaps ... none that come to mind atm.

    Overall ...hmmm ... 3.8/5
    Well done to everyone


     

  4. #4 Re: [DIBPro] Sailor Stars Fandub - Episode 200 Part A 
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    Quote Originally Posted by lemon_ice View Post
    Mixing - Some voice flaps were off and when Galaxia was comeing twords sailor moon around 4:47 sounded sorta weird but otherwise it was very good!
    I really don't know what you mean. I just looked at it myself. She says "What?" her lip flap seemed perfect there to me.

    But thanks for the critique lemon_ice, I'll def let KStar know she needs to put a bit more emotion (she doesn't go on this board anymore).


    super - Thanks for critique ^^.

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  5. #5 Re: [DIBPro] Sailor Stars Fandub - Episode 200 Part A 
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    I just finished watching this, and it was very good! ^^ Gack~ but since it's 3:30 AM now and I still have a good 150 pages to read before I go to "sleep," I'll try to write a full (but newbie) critique later on if I have time. But good job~ =]

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  6. #6 Re: [DIBPro] Sailor Stars Fandub - Episode 200 Part A 
    Usagi Tsukino - Kate Star (KStar) - You needed a lot more emotion, and a higher Usagi voice. There were some times were I heard a click in the end of your lines, or there was an annoying buzzing noise in the background.
    Galaxia - fruitfly - Squee! >w< You did an awesome job with the emotion, voice, everything. <3
    Light of Hope - Sarako (AnimeEyeshime) - You pronounced Galaxia wrong, but it was a good voice for the Light of Hope. ^-^
    Seiya Kou - Tegan S (teggy16) - A little lower, other than that no complaints. ^-^
    Singer - princesssailormoon - After the first couple lines I skipped through it. D: Stay away from your microphone pleaseee~ move it a little forward or backwards or something, I could only make out a couple of words because it was so muffled. T.T

    Mixing - BlazingFire456 - Nice work. ^^ I think I caught one missed mouth flap with Galaxia, but other than that it was pretty good. =]

    Overall: 3.9/5 ^_^

    Why did everyone say Galaxia a different way? o.O
    (: back after a while...

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  7. #7 Re: [DIBPro] Sailor Stars Fandub - Episode 200 Part A 
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    Usagi Tsukino - Kate Star (KStar) I expected something higher and cuter for Usagi, but I think her voice getting low kind of fit the mood of this episode. ^^ Sometimes the emotion could've been better, but it wasn't that bad.
    Galaxia - fruitfly Really good emotion! ^_^ You made me happy~
    Light of Hope - Sarako (AnimeEyeshime) Good good nyo!
    Seiya Kou - Tegan S (teggy16) Good good! ^-^ Your voice was one of my favorites >D
    Singer - princesssailormoon It sounded very strained and forced, and was hard to understand. If you're singing for the next episode, try practicing a bit more. It sounded like you were singer from your throat. ^^;

    Wheee! I can't wait to see more! ^__^
     

  8. #8 Re: [DIBPro] Sailor Stars Fandub - Episode 200 Part A 
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    SweetDreamzZz - Thanks
    x0Michellex0 - Thanks, and sorry if I missed any lip flaps, but not sure about Galaxia, will make sure AnimeEyeshime knows.
    Berri - Cool thanks ^^

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  9. #9 Re: [DIBPro] Sailor Stars Fandub - Episode 200 Part A 
    Everyone did a wonderful job! I just wish I had a better soundcard... ^^;; That's why the quality is so bad for me... Next year we're getting a new computer though. But yes, great job!

    Singer (Princesssailormoon) - You need to pronunciate a bit more, but otherwise, good job. ^_^

    Usagi (KStar) - You gave Usagi a more down-to-earth, realistic-sounding voice, and I think that's cool. It's interesting to hear different takes on characters' voices. Great Job! :3

    Galaxia (fruitfly) - You did wonderful, and sounded very Galaxia-ish. (That Chaos was awesome!)

    Light of Hope (AnimeEyeShime) - Beautiful, wonderful job. You sounded very gentle.

    Blazingfire456 - YAY! HORRAY! You did great at mixing! And of course, if it weren't for you, this project wouldn't be possible. ^________^
    Teggy/Tegan is pronounced with a long 'e'.
    Expect my first voice demo within a week or two!

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  10. #10 Re: [DIBPro] Sailor Stars Fandub - Episode 200 Part A 
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    Wow, this was mixed together so quickly! I was quite suprised to see it up all ready, especially since I was so slow. *dodges bullets* I think it's critique time.

    OP SINGER: Oh, PSM.. these are the same problems you've had since I first heard you. Some of them, at least. The good news is, you stepped back from your mic, and what a difference it makes! And your vocal control has improved. However, you have a problem with enunciation. I've heard you sing slower songs where it's not that much of an issue, but on faster songs things get jumbled together and the words are unrecognizable. What I'm hearing here is "somethingsomethingsomething SAILOR WINGS." Getting more familiar with the song will help a lot. Practice practice practice. When I'm having trouble with a faster song, I read the words out loud until I am comfortable with it. You can also try singing the song slower than normal to work on the cadence. It's time for you to reallly work for it. You already have a cute voice, so I want to see you put in some real effort.

    USAGI TSUKINO: I always enjoy seeing more KStar. I really like the tone you used for Usagi; she's more mature in this season and the depth in your voice brought that out while still being recognizably Usagi. I've heard you voice a few other characters, and you know how to make each one unique. That's great! All you have to do now is work on that pesky emotion. Don't be afraid to let go. Especially when you're screaming. I can tell that you're holding back; screaming is embarrassing! Find some way to loosen up, forget your inhibitions, and let 'er rip. Just think about the awesome reviews you'll get!

    LIGHT OF HOPE: I was a little curious how this would turn out, because I always figured that Galaxia and the Light of Hope would have the same voice. It's strange though.. because they actually matched up so well! You sound like a very nice version of Galaxia here. I love it. This is the first time I've heard you, and I'm glad to meet you. Or however that works. You have a lovely voice, and your emotion was spot on. Good show!

    SEIYA: I've heard your Seiya before, and I still think it needs to be lower. Even when she's female. Your emotion was very nice, though. Can't wait to see you in Part B (needs more Seiya.)

    GALAXIA: This was a difficult role for me. All the yelling and vocal changes! However, this is one of the few times I've watched myself in a dub and thought "Damn.. that was awesome." Very seldomly am I actually happy with my voice acting. Not that there aren't some things that need to be fixed. *cough* Particularly that part at the beginning when Galaxia is supposed to be good. I sound so corny. I really need to work on being nice. *cough* This was a really fun role to play, one I'd never done before. I had a blast.. on to Part B!

    MIXING: There are a few mistakes here and there. One mistake that a lot of people make when they start out mixing is mixing too loudly. Don't try to make your voices louder than your bgm and sfx. Do it the other way around. You want to make sure that your voices are mixed at a comfortable level and then put the bgm etc. under them. Otherwise you run into trouble where you've mixed the voices too loudly and they peak out. For instance, when Galaxia is talking before the OP. Partially my fault because by the time I got my lines in you'd already mixed everything else, but just keep an eye on it. Don't be afraid to mix everything a little quietly.. people will turn up their speakers.

    Some of the sound effects were a little odd. I think that's what people are talking about when they mentioned the part where Galaxia is coming toward Sailor Moon (4:47.) The lip flaps were fine, but there was a staticy "whoosh-ing" noise that drowned out the lines. I think you were using a wind effect there? Wind effects can be difficult, but you always want to keep the volume down on them. Otherwise everything starts to sound like you're in a subway tunnel. I did like a lot of the other sfx you used.

    I liked the filter on Galaxia when she's possessed by Chaos. I was wondering how you would achieve that. You made me sound cool. :S

    The OP singer was off of the music by just a smidge. I'm not sure if that was the mixing or the singer, but it helps if you have your singer turn in the song in parts. It makes mixing so much easier.

    You've made a really good start, and I'm very interested in seeing more dubs from you (ie. the rest of Stars, heh.)

    Good show, everyone!


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