[*Iris*] Kesenai Tsumi and Seishun Amigo [[acapella]]

[Iris Wisteria]

I've been procrastinating about posting Kesenai Tsumi. Basically, I didn't exactly have the guts to post it. ^^"" But I enjoyed doing this song. Heeee ^^. I can't say much. I still can't hold my notes though. You be the judge >_<

http://media.putfile.com/Kesenai-Tsumi---Iris-Wisteria

Kesenai Tsumi by Nana Kitade
Fullmetal Alchemist 1st ending


Seishun Amigo. I love this song! ^^"" But I can't find the karaoke or instrumental version anywhere hence the acapella. TT-TT I sound kinda shrill at the high notes ;_;. The shakyness is still there. Just a short acapella for this song. Does anyone have or knows where to find the karaoke or instrumental version for this song? Please tell me. Onegai desu!! >_<


http://media.putfile.com/Seishun-Ami...-Iris-Wisteria

Seishun Amigo by Shuji to Akira (YAMAPI!! KAME!!!! *glomps* XDD)
Nobuta wo Produce


Please comment and tell me what you think. Critiques welcomed!! ^--^

[anime_freakx1000]

I only heard Seishun Amigo, so I'm commenting only on that. ^^
In the beginning, some of the words were a little bit slurred. Your voice kind of sounds like a pop star..lol. Sometimes you were off tune, there were also times your voice is kind of trembling, maybe undeveloped vibrato? ^^;;
But you do have a good voice, work on that and you'll be great! ^^

[Iris Wisteria]

I only heard Seishun Amigo, so I'm commenting only on that. ^^
In the beginning, some of the words were a little bit slurred. Your voice kind of sounds like a pop star..lol. Sometimes you were off tune, there were also times your voice is kind of trembling, maybe undeveloped vibrato? ^^;;
But you do have a good voice, work on that and you'll be great! ^^

Ahahah ^^"" ....I'm not really good with acapella. ;_; ...But thank you for commenting! I'll keep your advice in mind ^--^

[Lemon Ice]

Your Kesenai Tsumi is WAY BETTER than mine XD for that song your pitch was a little off in the chorus, but other wise pretty good ^^

[SakuraNek0]

wot, lol.. I'm not too sure what to say, but that your vibrato is really strange (not in a good or bad way).. kind of creeps me out.. in a neutral way.. I.. I dunno how to explain it.. it's the shakeyness you mentioned, I think.. XD;; huh..?
I don't know what to say anymore.. Brain not functioning...

edit: oh, trembling.. I guess it sounds like that, but.. hmm.. it's a lil different? not sure how to explain it, sorry. ^^;;; hrmmmm..

[Iris Wisteria]

lemon_ice: Pitch is a problem that I'm still working on ^^"" . Thank you for the comment and advice! ^--^

SakuraNeko: ^^"""".......Err, sorry for creeping you out >_<. I'm still shaky when I record. I guess you could say I'm nervous everytime I record ^^"". Thanks for the advice though, I'll work on it!! xDD

[Aleema]

SEISHUN AMIGO!! <3 <3 *ahem*
Sorry, I can't give as great as critiques as those before me. So I'll just be a fangirl.

[Cheshire]

Kesenai Tsumi :: Ooooh, I love this song. You've got a really good sense of pitch here, don't think I heard much wrong, other than a few points during the chorus where you sounded just a tad shrill. And like SakuraNek0, you did sound a bit shakey or summat. Don't be nervous when you record, we're not gonna eat you or anything! X3 Try channeling that nervous energy you get into energy for the song. I find that helps me a good bit. :3

Seishun Amigo :: Pretty much the same as above. Still a bit shakey, but awesome pitch and everything. :3