FullMetal Alchemist episode 1 clip

[TwilightWolf]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MfmW-UhOwW8

I got bored and decided to dub a scene from the first episode of FullMetal Alchemist.

Cast

Edward: Keiya
Rose: lemon_ice

Song

"Unrest" from the FMA OST

[Lemon Ice]

uuugggghhh I sound so bad as Rose XD lol This was very good

Ed: I thought that you have a good Edward voice I would say a little higher of a pitch ^^ but very good with the mixing, I would like to add I think I want to hear you do Mustang! XD REALLY, REALLY BAD!

Rose: I sound so weird as Rose XD I need to be lower by just a little and I will practice more, the first line I said wasn't the best I finally got the 'What's that?" line with the right eomtion and The yelling took a while XD and my MIC quality could be better.

wow I critque myself harder than I did on you lol I think this was a good fandub ^^

[TwilightWolf]

I thought you did pretty good. And when I heard myself as Ed, I thought I was kind of a little high for him.

[Sanchu]

No you both did very well. I know cuz I actually listened for the whole thing. It didn't make me cringe or twitch. I smile and nodded.

Ed/Keiya: You have a nice voice and very close to ed's, but I couldn't help but feel like it was kinda whispery... actually kinda sexy for other characters... and possibly good for when ed does those depressed scenes but I felt it should be more solid here. Though none the less you did a fabulous job in my opinion and I really enjoy you voice!

Rose/lemon_ice: You're voice is pitch on. I love the attitude you gave her. The expression in your voice felt very real. I really enjoyed it. I think I enjoy your voice for her more then the original... no offense to her of course. ^_^

well done you two, if you had background music/sound and sound affects it would be pretty Excellent. ^_^ I can't wait to see further projects. Your voices are great.

[TwilightWolf]

well, I thought that since the only sound effect from that scene was Ed closing the book, I didn't think it would be neccesary to have it.

[Lemon Ice]

Rose/lemon_ice: You're voice is pitch on. I love the attitude you gave her. The expression in your voice felt very real. I really enjoyed it. I think I enjoy your voice for her more then the original... no offense to her of course. ^_^

Thanks! I find it helpful to have a MIC with a long cord so you can record farther away from the computer so you can hop around the room and interact with some objects that are smilliar to the ones in the clip XD

This is the first fandub I have ever been in too ^^

[Sanchu]

well, I thought that since the only sound effect from that scene was Ed closing the book, I didn't think it would be neccesary to have it.

Yeha I thought so but I wasn't sure... I guess I was so used to the exagerrated sound effects they would put in anime. Sometimes, like, they would have the sound of the walking and shifting of clothing or my all time fav that squish sound whenever breast pop up XD I'm always like: "mine don't make that sound!! I'm broken!" haha sorry... but yeah, in that case who need that sound! XD besides if you were really at the distance you couldn't here the person close the book unless they slammed it shut! XD So FABULOUS JOB! oh and your voice is still smexy ^__^ I think you did a great job on this.

[Sanchu]

this was extremely well done for your first time so super woot for you!

[Lemon Ice]

this was extremely well done for your first time so super woot for you!

Thanks I'm going to continue auditioning and everything ^^

[Cheshire]

Ooooh, FMA looove. <3

Keiya :: Nice job here. :3 Like someone else pointed out, I think you sounded a bit too, low/deep for Ed, and you sounded just a wee bit, hm...flat, I think? I know the scene's a pretty low-key one, but I think it might help if you sounded a bit amused or had just a lil' bit more attitude here, since Ed's basically just scoffing at the whole religion of Leto here. Other than that, though, nice. ^^

lemon_ice :: You did a nice job, too. ^^ I liked the emotion throughout your lines, and I think the only thing I noticed worth critiquing was that you sounded just a wee bit young for Rose. I can't remember exactly how old she's supposed to be here, but I think if you deepend your voice just a bit, it'd be awesome. ^^

Mixing :: Great job with the lip flaps and BGM. It would've been nice to have some sound effects though, like footsteps, maybe something for Rose cleaning the altar. other than that, though, great job. ^^