Cardcaptor Sakura Episode 17 Clip

[rikuXharada]

Hey everyone this is my first fandub. It's really short, but I worked pretty hard on it. It's the episode in which all of Sakura and Syaoran's classmates are disapeering do to a ghost, or a Clow Card for that matter. It's up to them to save their friends before they disapeer as well

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Cast:
Sakura: rikuXharada
Tomoyo: Rosette
Syaoran: Izanami

SFX: Sounddogs.com
BGM: **I'm going to get shot for this but** FMA soundtrack (I couldn't get the original songs XD


My Critique:
Sakura: Yeah I know I suck
Tomoyo: So cute, I love your voice so much.
Syaoran: no complaints either, your voice has really improved since the first time I recieved auditions from you.

[Sirius]

Wow, that was pretty fast. It was nicely done for a first shot at fandubbing.

Sakura-rikuxhadara: You already know I love you're Sakura voice. You caould have used a little more power in this though. Energy! Also there was one line "Tomoyo has vanished" that sounded really unnatural.

Tomoyo- Rosette: A very fitting voice for Tomoyo and a nice performance. You had the right amount of emotion, although it was a small part.

Syaoran- Izanami: Not bad, although a few lines came out sounding rather forced and you sounded a little harsh, even fo rival Syaoran. That's about it though.

Mixing: Again, nice job mixing. The sound effect were really good, and I liked your choice in BGM. While I was watching it I was like "Okay, I know it's not CCS but the music sounds so cool!"

The one thing that bugged me was when Sakura and Tomoyo were running across the bridge, Sakura's mouth was moving but she wasn't talking. But that's aout it.

[Rosette]

I really liked this, and was surprised it was released so quickly!

Review time~

rikuXharada - Sakura: Awww, your Sakura voice is so kawaii~! In most cases the emotion was really good, too (in some you just needed a bit more energy, that's all). Overall, nice job!

Me - Tomoyo: Meh. Could've used a bit more emotion for the scream, and maybe raised the pitch a bit, but oh well. Wasn't the worst job I've ever done...

Izanami - Syaoran: I loved your performance--your boy voice is amazing! Well done~

Mixing: Really good considering this is your first fandub. I thought the music was fine; it seemed very fitting of the mood. SFX sounded good, too. The only thing I would've added was something to go along with Li using the Lasin board, but otherwise it sounded really good!

[Dinkar]

Sakura/rikuXharada: I love your Sakura voice. It's so adorable. ^^ But yeah, the "We've gotta get outta here!" line could've used a bit more energy. That's it, though.

Tomoyo/Rosette: Loved it. No complaints. Great emotion.

Syaoran/Me: Heheh. I wasn't too awful, at least. I'm proud of my performance here.

Mixing: Awesome job with the mixing. Loved it.

[rikuXharada]

The one thing that bugged me was when Sakura and Tomoyo were running across the bridge, Sakura's mouth was moving but she wasn't talking. But that's aout it.

she didn't have a lines in the dub, so i didn't know what to put

[MaNa Shuffle]

Wow

rikuXharada - Nice Sakura. Very cute but some lines sound monotone-ish

Izanami - Nice performance. even though your Shayran was a little high (sounds like a Kohaku.cool).
Good Job

Rosette : Nice Tomoyo. I like how she spoke. It had a natural sound.

Mixing : Well done.
But the music was loud at one point.

Great choice of music from FMA.

1st fandub? It is really good Riku. Good Job!

[SakuraLee]

Its good for a first fandub! ^^

Sakura: Great voice for Sakura, although more energy as someone before mentioned would have made it better ( pretty much perfect though)

Tomoyo: Good emotion, suiting voice, no problems! ^^

Syaoran: Wow! ^^ Loved the Syaoran voice, it was really good, but a little mean lol

Mixing: Apart from the bridge line which has been addressed, good mixing!

[Tali]

Sakura: You had a really cute voice. However i think you were concentrating on sustaining it where you could have used a little more emotion.

Tomoyo:I love your Tomoyo voice. It's very sweet but not squeaky which is where a lot of vas have made mistakes in the past.

Syaoran: Wow you are really good at him. Nice work.

Mixing: The music really worked! It perfetly fitted the scene. As Rosette said some sound effects or tense music when Syaoran used the thingymabobba might have been better. Also when sakura's running and her mouth is moving I'm pretty sure she's meant to be panting. That's why there's no words.

A good clip. i hope you do more really soon!

[Sirius]

Also when sakura's running and her mouth is moving I'm pretty sure she's meant to be panting. That's why there's no words.

I hadn't thought of that. makes sense though.

[Shizuko]

Sakura: I so love your Sakura voice!,but you could of used some more emotion on some of your lines.

Tomoyo: Great job! No complaints here.

Syaoran: I felt the voice was a little to high for him and he did sound kinda harsh like SiriusFan17 said but other than that,you did pretty good.

Mixing: Well done for your first time!