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  1. #1 Egao ni Aitai 
    Yayyy. XD This is for a project YFS is doing, but I just had to post my song! I'll probably resing it for the final product.

    This is the TV size of Egao ni Aitai, the theme song for Marmalade Boy.

    5 takes pieced together. Added a few crappy effects as well. ....I don't like the turnout much. ^^; Mic puffs abound. x_x

    Critique is HIGHLY appreciated. X3
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    Edit- Karaoke is now louder.
    Last edited by Keruri; 11-06-2006 at 12:04 AM.
     

  2. #2 Re: Egao ni Aitai 
    Okay, I have to let it out: AACK THAT WAS WAS SO FREAKING CUTE, GIVE ME YOUR VOICE

    I think the karaoke could've been a bit louder to give yourself more support, it sounds as if you're next to the mic, scared of the mic, and a bit mumbling and then you amplified it. Put energy and confidence in your singing! Even if you hit every note wrong at least put some KAAA-BAM! into it.

    Sometimes your voice wavered at the end of the phrases, and it cracked a bit at the beginnings- give us some nice wholesome notes at the beginnings, check your pitch before you hit it, and give yourself some breath support

    I think you could've added a bit more dyanamics, I can see some creshendos going on, but they weren't too creshen-do-wy-ish. Add some texture into the song !

    Otherwise, for the most part your notes were good, and you have a really pretty (and cute) and clear (AND CUTE 8D) voice, I love your singing ~!

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  3. #3 Re: Egao ni Aitai 
    SUTEKIIIII! I want your voice. Its too kawaiiiii T.T Some parts sounded like your voice cracked in the beginning, and it was a little quiet.... BUT IT WAS TOO FREAKING CUTE. 8D
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  4. #4 Re: Egao ni Aitai 
    Thank you so very much! I'll do another version of this later, and I assure you that it will be much better!
     

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    Awww...how cute. And I love this song! I do think you could have put a little more energy into it, though.

    edit: Have you ever tried voicing Mikuru from The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya? You'd do well at it.
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    Yay! xD I love this song too! =3 Anyway,

    YOUR. VOICE. IS. Adorable. =D At some part it sort of cracked and wavered, but it was so sweet! >w<
     

  7. #7 Re: Egao ni Aitai 
    Thank you! I'll do my very best next time.... I need to improve!

    Anyway, thank you for the critique. If anyone else has any comments or critique, please do express them!
     

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    There are a few note issues, but your tone and the emotion you put into was very effective and as always your voice is super KAWAII!!!! >^^<







    I really should voice act more.....
     

  9. #9 Re: Egao ni Aitai 
    Bump. I want critique~ ^^;
     

  10. #10 Re: Egao ni Aitai 
    Just a little more confidence.
    And it seemed to cut off a little abruptly. I also noticed a few puffs here and there.
    Otherwise... it was absolutely adorable. ^^ *hands you a "kawaii" sticker*

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