Egao ni Aitai

[Keruri]

Yayyy. XD This is for a project YFS is doing, but I just had to post my song! I'll probably resing it for the final product.

This is the TV size of Egao ni Aitai, the theme song for Marmalade Boy.

5 takes pieced together. Added a few crappy effects as well. ....I don't like the turnout much. ^^; Mic puffs abound. x_x

Critique is HIGHLY appreciated. X3
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Edit- Karaoke is now louder.

[YingFaStar]

Okay, I have to let it out: AACK THAT WAS WAS SO FREAKING CUTE, GIVE ME YOUR VOICE

I think the karaoke could've been a bit louder to give yourself more support, it sounds as if you're next to the mic, scared of the mic, and a bit mumbling and then you amplified it. Put energy and confidence in your singing! Even if you hit every note wrong at least put some KAAA-BAM! into it.

Sometimes your voice wavered at the end of the phrases, and it cracked a bit at the beginnings- give us some nice wholesome notes at the beginnings, check your pitch before you hit it, and give yourself some breath support

I think you could've added a bit more dyanamics, I can see some creshendos going on, but they weren't too creshen-do-wy-ish. Add some texture into the song !

Otherwise, for the most part your notes were good, and you have a really pretty (and cute) and clear (AND CUTE 8D) voice, I love your singing ~!

[x0Michellex0]

SUTEKIIIII! I want your voice. Its too kawaiiiii T.T Some parts sounded like your voice cracked in the beginning, and it was a little quiet.... BUT IT WAS TOO FREAKING CUTE. 8D

[Keruri]

Thank you so very much! I'll do another version of this later, and I assure you that it will be much better!

[Haushinka]

Awww...how cute. And I love this song! I do think you could have put a little more energy into it, though.

edit: Have you ever tried voicing Mikuru from The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya? You'd do well at it.

[hakinechan]

Yay! xD I love this song too! =3 Anyway,

YOUR. VOICE. IS. Adorable. =D At some part it sort of cracked and wavered, but it was so sweet! >w<

[Keruri]

Thank you! I'll do my very best next time.... I need to improve!

Anyway, thank you for the critique. If anyone else has any comments or critique, please do express them!

[AmreeTakahara]

There are a few note issues, but your tone and the emotion you put into was very effective and as always your voice is super KAWAII!!!! >^^<

[Keruri]

Bump. I want critique~ ^^;

[Ryou Shirogane]

Just a little more confidence.
And it seemed to cut off a little abruptly. I also noticed a few puffs here and there.
Otherwise... it was absolutely adorable. ^^ *hands you a "kawaii" sticker*