[Original Radioplay] Genesis Avalon - EPISODE THREE!

[GenesisAvalon]

AFTER A LONG WAIT AND LOTS OF BUGGING FOR LINES... AND A RECAST,

I BRING YOU GENESIS AVALON - EPISODE THREE!


Once again, I've got the link and cast of the Prologue on here, then the link and cast for Episode One, and Episode Two. I would appreciate reviews IMMENSELY... that, and... well... I'd love to build a fan base. That would just be plain awesome.

This shit is COPYRIGHTED!

Genesis Avalon - COPYRIGHT 2005 Kathryn Peets

Pretty much. No touchie da storyline.




Well, here we go! First, the Prologue of Genesis Avalon:

DOWNLOAD:

Genesis Avalon - The Prologue

File Type: MP3
File Size: 17.8 MB
Duration: 19:27

And now, onto the cast of the Prologue, in order of Appearance:

Jaina Masterson/Genesis Avalon: Laura Post
Noir: Hawkeye_GGK
Natalie Hall: Michelleann
Zee Lewis: Iscabibble
Dr. Matthews: Lee Ann Brown - Literally, MY MOM (Sudden cast change)


Genesis Avalon: Episode One

DOWNLOAD:

PART A:
Genesis Avalon - Episode One: Part A

File Type: MP3
File Size: 13.5 MB
Duration: 14:08

PART B:
Genesis Avalon - Episode One: Part B

File Type: MP3
File Size: 18.4 MB
Duration: 19:15

CAST OF EPISODE ONE, In order of appearance:

Noir: Hawkeye_GGK
Jaina Masterson/GenesisAvalon: Laura Post
Zee Lewis: Aurianna
Victim: Songbird, AKA "Susa"
Demon: Matt Alan
Julian Alexander: Hisoka
Assara Templari: Genesis Avalon
Roxanne Dawes: "Nell," AKA Aden
Natalie Hall: Michelle Ann
Tanya Laramie: Tris-chan
Obsidian: ClymAngus


Genesis Avalon - Episode Two:

Genesis Avalon - Episode Two

File Type: MP3
File Size: 18 MB
Duration: 19:36


Cast, in order of Appearance:

Jaina Masterson/GenesisAvalon: Laura Post
Bobby Carson: Wicked5
Julian Alexander: Hisoka
Martin Alver: Matt Alan
Tanya Laramie: Tris-chan
Noir: Hawkeye_GGK
Demon: Matt Alan
Assara Templari: Genesis Avalon
Lilith: AetherNyte
Cop: ClymAngus

*NEW!!!*

Genesis Avalon - Episode Three:

Genesis Avalon - Episode Three

File Type: MP3
File Size: 20.18 MB
Duration: 22 Minutes

CAST, In Order of Appearance:

Roxanne Dawes: "Nell," AKA Aden
Jaina Masterson/GenesisAvalon: Laura Post
Zee Lewis: Aurianna
Noir: Hawkeye_GGK
Obsidian: ClymAngus
Lilith: AetherNyte
Natalie Hall: Michelle Ann
Assara Templari: Genesis Avalon
Tanya Laramie: Aurianna
Julian Alexander: Hisoka
Doctor Viktor Von Doom: Col. Phil Bilko
Bobby Carson: Wicked5

MUSIC:

Corynorhinus from Batman Begins OST
4am by VNV Nation
Crucified by The Genitorturers
Beloved from Ayashi No Ceres OST II
Kamui from X OST
D Minor Predude, Op 28 by Frederic Chopin
Cradle Song from Escaflowne OST
Machete by Moby
Forfeit by Chevelle
Ancient Dragon's Fort from Chrono Cross OST
Overcome One's Grief from Chrono Cross OST


SFX for all episodes: Credit to Sounddogs.com

Listen and PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE review! I need any comments I can get!

And as we get some reviews, I will be posting my own reviews of the cast! ^_^ I promise. This time I will DO IT.


And look for the new episode of Avalon, Episode Four to hit the VAA in December when I get back from England! ^_^

Kat/Genesis Avalon

[Batgirl]

Ok OMG REVIEW.

I'm so happy this came out, have I mentioned that? Because YAY.

I'd mention the quality, but I all ready know thats going to be fixed in the very near future. ^^

ok then.

Roxanne Dawes: "Nell," AKA Aden - Good job! I thought all your reactions were very believable, and you did a good job overall.

Jaina Masterson/GenesisAvalon: Laura Post - You drama queen. XP

Zee Lewis: Aurianna - I know how the character of Zee is sorta laid back, and unphased by things, but I think overall you could have gone a little farther acting with her than you did. But still a good job, I really liked hearing some real emotion at the end. ^^

Noir: Hawkeye_GGK - omg I loved the scratch behind the ears bit. You ARE such a cat. <3

Obsidian: ClymAngus - Clym. I adore you. You are so evil and ... EVIL. And just, really REALLY good job.

Lilith: AetherNyte - You didn't have a very big part this time around, but I still love your voice. <3

Natalie Hall: Michelle Ann - Very good job. I love your voice Michelle. ^^

Assara Templari: Genesis Avalon - Good Job. I sense TENSION! ANGER! and other such things. ^^ Really though I loved your scene with Noir, I like learning more about her character.

Tanya Laramie: Aurianna - heh heh the old Tanya was so sweet sounding, I'd feel bad when Julian would blow her off. This is more how I originally imagined Tanya, I love to hate you. <3

Julian Alexander: Hisoka - Easily your best acting so far. Good job. I felt like you could have done a little more in the first scene between you and Tanya, since she was giving so much and it felt like you were giving absolutely nothing. And from what I understand about Julian, he still loves or at least likes Tanya atm. ^^

Doctor Viktor Von Doom: Col. Phil Bilko - Wow! I didn't know what to expect from Doom when I read the script, but you are Totally awesome! Really Good job!

Bobby Carson: Wicked5 - I was so glad I got to hear more of you. I don't know what it is about your character, but I totally love him. Good job!

Sound Effects - There were a couple parts I thought the sound effects could use some work, the two spots I can think of off the top of my head were 1) The pacing, I think it was a little too fast and maybe a little too loud so it got distracting. And Two, when Julian catches Avalon. If she's really falling down like a rocket, it should make more of an impact when Julian catches her, it felt more like he caught a bag of flour, or a beanbag or something when I heard that Sound Effect. Other than that though, good job!

Music - I always love your choices in music, this episode is no exception. ^^

Mixing - A couple spots where I think it got too loud or there were minor volume issues, but they were so small I can't remember off the top of my head. Good job!

Overall: YAY

[TsiXin]

Ok, I really wanna listen to this, but somehow, the links to both parts of chapter 1 are not working...so I just have the prologue, chapter's 2 and 3...and understandably I don't wanna start listening till I have all to enjoy at once. Can someone upload them again?
Thx!

[GenesisAvalon]

Hmmm, okay, I don't know why the space that was given to me isn't working anymore, buuuut, I'm going to download it from my other computer and I'll upload it to Filefront. It'll be up within a few hours... I hope.

[GenesisAvalon]

Ok, I really wanna listen to this, but somehow, the links to both parts of chapter 1 are not working...so I just have the prologue, chapter's 2 and 3...and understandably I don't wanna start listening till I have all to enjoy at once. Can someone upload them again?
Thx!

Okay, there's new links up there! ^^ Sorry about the inconvenience! ENJOY!

[TsiXin]

Thank you. Ahem...Listened to the Prologue and I must say it is very intriguing. Ok, extremely intriguing. I like the usage of BGM and I could feel the voices and the story. Y'know...you just feel the voices..? Oh well, maybe its just me. It was great. I'll edit this post when I listen to more of them.

[Trent]

YAY!!! That was pretty darn spectacular and stuff.

Since Laura says that the sound quality issue is being addressed and I believe her, I have no complaints whatsoever for Kathryn.

Roxanne Dawes: "Nell," AKA Aden - Awesome job! Great acting! Very natural.

Jaina Masterson/GenesisAvalon: Laura Post - Gee, Laura just seems to get better and better with each episode... which has got to just be my imagination... because, how can you improve on perfection? Jaina's getting cuter and less annoying, too! Awesome job making the audience (me) feel your pain. And I still love how there's a distinct difference between Jaina's voice and Avalon's.

Zee Lewis: Aurianna - I'm falling in love with this character! So disattached! She sorta reminds me of one of those Tendo girls from Ranma -- the one who always takes advantage of an opportunity to take advantage of somebody.

Noir: Hawkeye_GGK - This character is developing quite nicely. Awesome Job, Hawkeye!

Obsidian: ClymAngus - Clym is still creepy.

Lilith: AetherNyte - Awesome job!

Natalie Hall: Michelle Ann - YAY!

Assara Templari: Genesis Avalon - Don't interrupt this girl when she's performing ritual killings -- or you'll become one! Awesome job by Kat, of course.

Tanya Laramie: Aurianna - Auri did an awesome job! But my reaction was pretty much the opposite of Laura's. I thought Auri's Tanya sounded really sweet and I felt sorry for her.

Julian Alexander: Hisoka - I totally agree with everything Laura said, because she is the goddess of voiceactingness and knows all.

Doctor Viktor Von Doom: Col. Phil Bilko - Oooh... Vik is a very suave and sophisticated villainy-type character. No! Stay away from him ladies! He may sound sexy, but he is EVIL!!!

Bobby Carson: Wicked5 - Yay! Bobby's back. Bobby is my friend. I like Bobby. A short bit in this episode, but Wicked does a great job.

So, overall I'd have to say that I'm very pleased with how this came out. The entire cast is absolutely awesome, and Kathryn is awesome for putting so much awesomeness all together for us to enjoy. What's that, Kat? Yes, yes, of course I'm working on my lines for episode 4. ::cough:: Yes, ma'am. I'll log off right now and get to work. NO!!! NOT THE CHAINS AGAIN!!! AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

[GenesisAvalon]

Haha, wow, thanks, Trent.

Yeah, I figured out what happened with the sound quality... but, I don't know if I can fix it. GRR. I'm trying, though. It was the rate at which I was exporting scenes and then the whole project, but some scenes can be fixed, the others can't. GRR. So, I'll try to put together a better version this weekend and get it up here.

Trent... *Clears throat, hides chains behind her back* Did you get me the lines yet, punkin?

[Aurianna]

Roxanne- Good, good. I think the "ugh, bite my head off, bitch" line wasn't as emotional as it could have been, but in general you had the catty girly fight down pretty well.

Jaina/GenesisAvalon- Good job once again. I absolutely loved your crying scene, angsty over your secret. That was really well done. The parts where you were injured, also very good.

Zee Lewis- I had so much trouble with her, this ep. I did an entire set of lines first, but they were too snarky. But I agree that these sounded almost too deadpan. My excuse will be that I interpret Zee as a pot smoker, and that's just how she sounds when she's stoned. Yup. Just like that.

Noir- Nice to see that issues with volume are completely gone. Now you just sound yummy. Really liked the gruffer lines too.

Obsidian- Perfect. You'd make small children cry.

Lilith- A little hard for me to hear, and not too many lines, but no complaints.

Natalie- This is higher than your normal voice, isn't it? Good job fitting it to the perfect "friend voice." Also very good during the bitch fight.

Assara- Haha... your pissed off lines sounded good. But lots of practice, I'm guessing.

Tanya- I don't think the lines themselves were bad, but I don't think I ended up sounding nearly close to Tris-chan. More whiny. Oh wells.

Julian Alexander- Your emotion is getting better every episode. The part where you rescued Avalon was especially good.

Doctor Viktor Von Doom- Wow. I don't think I've heard you in anything before. But I liked! Very suave and wicked sounding. I think your taunting lines could have sounded better... but the slowing down line... very nice. Good laugh too.

Bobby- Haha... hardly any full sentences at first, but that bit in the beginning was delivered really well. That could have sounded so forced if not done correctly, but you nailed it.


Mixing: The part where Assara is first in it... there was a second where I couldn't hear anything... not sure what was supposed to be happening there... aside from that... volumes good, music good... transformation/battle sounds really good.

Can't wait for more! Yay! Great job Kat. Worth the wait.

[GenesisAvalon]

Bit of a bump for reviews, but I'd also like to tell everyone that I've managed to fix the quality issue for the most part - YAY - and I know how to prevent it in the future now, buuuut, I can't upload it until Filefront stops telling me it won't let me upload anything because of maintenance. ^_^

So, yeah. ^_^