"Tsuki no Ie" Song Clip!!!

[Queen Anime 99]

Hey everyone! Here is a clip of me singing "Tsuki no Ie" from the anime series Outlaw Star. Here is the download link:

http://storeandserve.com/download/28...9_TnI.mp3.html

And before you critique, this is not a serious performance. ^_^

[Crimson]

Don't take this in a bad way since you aren't actually all that bad, but if it's not a serious performance than why don't you practice some more and make it into one before posting?

If you'll accept any critique, I thought you sounded kinda deadpan at the beginning, but that could have been partially due to an unfamiliarity with the notes. This got better as the song went on.
Also your japanese is generally pretty clear, but there were a couple points you could use some work on with enounciation - when it's acappella like this your voice should come across crystal clear, but you still had some blurred consanants like r sounds like w, a little in a few parts to name one.

[Queen Anime 99]

Hey! Thanks for replying. The reason I said that it wasn't serious is because it wasn't really serious, but I wanted to post it anyway. Also, I was kind of afraid that someone would say something really bad (I've seen some people flat out write "You suck". ^_^ I mean, I don't mind constructive criticism at all (especially with my lame voice acting skills ^_^), I was just a little worried, is all. Yeah, my voice was a little odd in the beginning. And I shall work on my pronounciation (I have problems with my pronounciation even when I'm speaking English ^_^). I'm thinking about learning Japanese anyway because it's such a cool language.

[Queen Anime 99]

Papa John!

[minkchan]

Tsuki no Ie's such a nice and soothing song. If you want, I have the karaoke to this....but anyway, you definately don't suck. That was nice. As for pronounciation, I agree with Crim, but for me it sounded a bit like you were too pre-ocupied with pronouncing which made the song sound a tad choppy specially towards the end. Hmm you kinda sound like my friend here when she sang Tokyo (By Yui). Oh and for some reason it's only playing on the right side of my ear phones.

[Queen Anime 99]

Hey! Thank so much for replying! Yeah, I totally need to work on my pronounciation. I plan to learn Japanese sometime in the future so I can go to Japan. ^_^ It was also a challenge because I was singing in my "boy voice"...or at least it was supposed to be my boy voice. ^_^ That's cool that I sound like your friend. You could only hear it on the right side of your earphones? That's odd. Oh yeah. You can send me the karaoke version. My e-mail is queenanime99@hotmail.com. Thanks.

Tsuki no Ie's such a nice and soothing song. If you want, I have the karaoke to this....but anyway, you definately don't suck. That was nice. As for pronounciation, I agree with Crim, but for me it sounded a bit like you were too pre-ocupied with pronouncing which made the song sound a tad choppy specially towards the end. Hmm you kinda sound like my friend here when she sang Tokyo (By Yui). Oh and for some reason it's only playing on the right side of my ear phones.