Audition Review Thread

[Cristina]

Thanks for the very detailed review, Ms. Fruitfly~ I'm definately gonna send in some redos. ^^
Haush, Naraku and Kitsune- I'll review your stuff soon ^^.
I think I'll also upload my Rena lines XD!

[Icypopcorn]

This is a VERY good thread X: It doesn't even deserve to be in the Fun section in my opinion. XD It should be in Voice Acting Chat or something.. it's not just mindless posting XD;

WOW. Your auds were fantastic! How could I even THINK about posting mine >_<;;
Well, I WAS gonna post mine but I'm too embarrased to now x: Maybe I will in the near future.

I would write a review, but I can't at the moment. So I'll review someone later

[Haushinka]

Wow, Fruitfly! Thanks for the awesome in-depth review! I don't think you picked it apart too much, that's exactly what I'm looking for when it comes down to whether or not I need to redo my auditions.

Review on KitsuneSqueak//Rena:
Your tone was very nice for her; however, I think it would help if you leveled out the volume a bit, by use of dynamics processing/normalization or just trying to keep it at a closer volume level - ex; the laugh kind of hurt my ears and then I had to turn it way up again for the soft part afterwards. There were also some puffs/breath noises which could be fixed using a windscreen or pop filter.

Now, some more auditions of my own:
http://rei-chan.net/HikaruNoGo.zip

Auditioning for Akari in Hikaru No Go. Honest reviews are much appreciated, so please don't worry about being too harsh or anything =]

[Nikki Wright]

Oh, man. This is my kind of thread. >D;;

..I'll post critiques later!

I hope I don't make anyone cry. ._.

[minkchan]

Oooh me too....This a thread I definately like. Now if only they had a singing one.... Anyway since I'm somewhat trying to get back into VA-ing and not just singing, soo... guess I could post here... here's my audition for Misato on the Eva-R proddy.
http://www.streamload.com/minkchan/m...ine01and02.zip

Since it's been a while I'm quite sure I'll need a bunch of polishing ^^;;

[Scarlotte]

Nikki I'm positive no one will cry. ^-^

Haushinka

Well your voice suits the character really well, judging by the voice samples your voice was a bit higher or sounding a bit too young but I have yet to read the rules on auditioning for that project so I don't know the requirements of the voice. Anyways the first line was done really well I don't thinkanything was wrong with it and same with your second line, maybe a bit lower but I still have yet to read the rules. As for your third line you sound a bit too young and in the sample the japanese voice actress seems to be in more of a panic rather than a worried tone. Hope this helps! ^-^

[lionfayt]

well, i alredy sent these in, but......i'd like to know from other people if they're good
they're of my auds for Shinbo and Fujiwara no Sai from Hikaru no Go

Lines for Fujiwara no Sai
line1: quiet crying
http://media.putfile.com/Lionfayt_FujiwaranoSai_01

Line2: Hikaru, i'm going to start
http://media.putfile.com/Lionfayt_FujiwaranoSai_02

line3: 17-4 upper right corner-Komoku!
http://media.putfile.com/Lionfayt_FujiwaranoSai_03

lines for Shindo Hikaru
Line1: my strength? i'm...not sure
http://media.putfile.com/Lionfayt_Shinbo_01

line2: i've never played anyone, although i'm pretty sure i'm decently strong
http://media.putfile.com/Lionfayt_Shinbo_02

line3: What?! I have to pay?!
http://media.putfile.com/Lionfayt_Shinbo_03

here you go, hope you like......tell me critiques^_^_^

[Jiffy]

Can someone give me some pointers on my attempt at Nagi from My Hime/My Otome?

Download

Thanks.

[KitsuneSqueak]

Jiffy:

Though you have the evil tone mostly going, the voice just doesn't fit. I don't know how to say it....it's just a bit too...rough and airy?

[Scarlotte]

Minkchan

Well I can't do a very good reveiw because I don't know the character's personality but thanks for telling me the project. Anyways I'll try to be helpful. So for the first line "to believe in God" was said very well I believe Misato was a quieter character? but maybe for the "not fear Him" you could've sounded more afraid and when you said "Him" you sounded a bit flat. and for "maybe we are no better than the enemy" you probably could've sounded more depressed especially for the word "are". Line two well you were yelling to lauch but maybe instead of starting out very loud you start with a powerful voice as if charging or something then when you say "launch" let go of everything you just charged up! ^-^ Hope this was helpful.


Lionfayt

Lets see, for Shindo your first line was good maybe you could've sounded more questioning when you said "strength" but other than that it sounded alright. Line two maybe if you try saying it as though you were stateing a fact, but then when you say "although I'm pretty sure I'm decently strong" maybe you should sound more reassuring rather than nervous, at least that's what I get from the samples. For line three maybe sound a bit more surprised when you say "what" and in a whinier tone yet still surprised tone say "I have to pay?!"

Now for line one with Sai sound a bit happier so when you do that line sort of give happy sighs through out it, now I don't mean pause and give a huge sigh but I mean do a couple of crying noises but end one or so of them with a bit if a small happy sigh (ya it doesn't really make sense does it...). Now for the second line you sound a bit emotionless, I relize the sample is sort of the same way but make it seem as though you just got over this huge disappointment or something so your quiet but there's still a hint or courage. Now for line three ya I think it's fine I think you got the emotion right! ^-^ Good luck with your auditions!


Jiffy

Well you sounded evil enough, ^-^but I don't know if that's good or bad. Now your emotion was on spot, but I agree with KitsuneSqueak your voice was or of rough and airy, maybe if it was a bit higher and more bratty or something?Sorry the picture makes him look like a brat >.< but this is my shortest review so sorry this probably isn't to great but you had very good emotion! ^-^