Sprawl Metropolis Episode One: Blocked Paths

[Brad Tajiri]

Sprawl Metropolis Episode One: Blocked Paths

Watch it here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/293892

Format: Flash
Size: 4.2 MB
Length 7:09

Summary: Trapped in a ghost town, a man known only as The Traveler must fight for his life!

Cast:

The Traveler - SeiryuRenaih
Hantu - N. Mario Lafferentte
The Kid - voiceactorwannabe
Villagers - Forbin

Music composed by Michael Watts
Written and animated by Brad Quigley

Enjoy!

[explosivoooo]

Very awsome. It looks like it's get off to a good start. Only complaints i had were that some of the sound effects seemed off to me. The DBZ crash kept getting cut off, and the steps were a little off too. It seemed like the sound effects were a little scattered and were alot more noticeable if they were bad because they were scattered. That was about the only thing i saw wrong.

The music was awsome, the angles you chose were great and the animation was very smooth. The simplicity of the drawing didn't take away from the feel of the movie. The characters were very...human, for lack of a better word. They helped bring you into the story.

Can't wait for the others.

[Azure]

Wow I really enjoyed that! the way the demon was animated and the way the shots panned around were superb! I think animation-wise the human animation needs to be tigthed up it didn't seem to flow as well as the rest.
The stroy and VO were also really superb, there was some slight hiss on The Travelors lines but the performance was great ^^

[S.A.]

WOOHOO the long awaited Sprawl Metropolis. I watched and I loved! Glad to have been apart of the project (My quality freakin sucked!) Everyone did a surperb job especially Mario I loved his voice for Hantu, spine tingling. The animation was GREAT! You did an excllent job on the animation. I'm looking forward to ep2

[Zankoku no Yami]

Sweet! I liked the preview i saw of this a while back... and so i had to check it out ^^ awesome action! And great flash making, some of the best i've seen! The voices really fit X3. And the music was great as well! Over all, its really good and I cant wait for more!! This looks like its gonna be a great flash series >.>

[explosivoooo]

Wow! Front page on Newgrounds! congrats

[Brad Tajiri]

Wow! Front page on Newgrounds! congrats

Thanks, that caught me of guard.

And thanks for the comments guys but I do feel I could've done better here, especially with the dialogue. (Which is quite corny once I watch it.) But the future episodes are going to be much more sophisticated and more natural than this one, so look forward to 'em!

[Pombar]

Wow... this was awesome. I would add some constructive criticism, but I honestly can't think of any just yet(or at all ). There were some typos, but hey. Fantastic stuff. Can't wait for more.

[Kakumei]

OO! I love it! Like mentioned above, I can't think of any real constructive criticism. It did seem that the music was louder than the voices until the end, then the voices got loud. That's about it. In general, though, I very much liked it.

[Darius]

That was great man I'm very excited about seeing the next episode. Now I will say the dub had some steryotypical anime dialouge at points, but you say that your working on making it more sophisticated so I belive you!

Also if you ever need a voice then please look me up. This is just my voice in a boredom dub but please check me out and PM me if you think I am able to fill a role you might like.

http://voiceactingalliance.com/board...ad.php?t=11089