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Watercolor
09-22-2005, 05:36 PM
What am I to you?
A memory you wish you could erase?
A constant reminder of your failure?
Something for you to feel ashamed?

Am I an apology?
Am I an excuse?
Am I something other then human?
Am I something for you to use?

What am I?
Am I skin?
Am I blood?
I am an empty emotion you have no use of.

I am love.

Tali
09-22-2005, 10:26 PM
ooh, I loved this! The only problem is the last line of the first verse should be,
"Something for you to feel ashamed of?"
As usual good work!

Cefaclor
09-23-2005, 04:25 AM
Agreed. Awesome poem!
When you named it "what am I?" I was automatically interested. Inspires me to write a "what am I" poem of my own.

fairuza
09-23-2005, 04:39 AM
Lovely poem.
I suck at making poems though. But I thought this one was beautiful.
Your work has an extreme way of touching the soul in a sense, I think. Very touching work.:3