nirvanic-s' Female Character Demo (Critiques~?)

[Nirvanic-s]

So this is my first time posting a demo reel on this site (most of mine go on a voice acting/music blog on tumblr), but I think this showcases a lot of my range with some recognizable characters! At least...American animation characters. That's most of what I watch (and, uh, supernatural), so that's what bled over into this reel and less Asian animation. I mean, pretty much every series in the reel is one where I'm a part of the fandom. .-. So I mean. That worked out well.
Although, I do have to say, it kind of goes from least like my normal voice to most like my normal voice. OTL.

Anyway, I'd really love it if you guys could tell me what you think and if you have any tips! I know it's a bit long at 1:27, but I'm working on cutting things down in the future. Also, please let me know if for some reason, the demo reel doesn't show up on here. Again, first time and all, heeeeh.


Characters featured:

Artemis Crock — Young Justice (high/raspy)
Meg — Supernatural (medium-high/whispy)
Raven — Teen Titans (medium-low/creaky)
Korra — The Legend of Korra (medium/bold)



DEMO REEL (http://soundcloud.com/glacialmai/female-character-2012)

[JazyXIII]

The link isn't working for me :)
If you fix it, I'll check it out o:

(its saying I have to log in to box to access my file. Perhaps you linked to the wrong thing?)

[Nirvanic-s]

Ah, I'm sorry! I didn't know you needed a box account to see other box files. That's not very helpful. :/
Anyway, the link is fixed now, thank you!

[JazyXIII]

The first set of lines -- could be a little clearer -- had a bit of trouble understanding near the end of it. I'd say slow down a bit on that one.
The second set, the Supernatural one, a little squeaky in places.
Raven, hah, I love Raven. Wouldn't hurt to make the words a little more pronounced, but it's rather good.
Korra. Korra, Korra, Korra. That first line, I really liked it. The laughter in the words at the start was rather charming -- and your voice suits her well.

I'm not the best at critiques, I'd say just work on making your words a bit clearer and you should be good. c:

[Nirvanic-s]

Thank you! That's really helpful and I'll work on pronouncing the words more clearly. I have a tendency to slur. ^^'

[JazyXIII]

No problem! I have the same issue so I've been working to stop slurs. Going through and pronouncing my lines slowly and clearly before recording has been helping a bit.