View Full Version : Male Character UchihaRain23 2012 Demo Reel
06-28-2012, 12:37 AM
Hey everyone. This is my first ever demo reel. I wanted to get out there more so Here it is. I wrote this myself with a little help from SuiOtoko19.
WARNING: It is a little loud at parts.
06-28-2012, 12:39 AM
The Yelling sounds really good. but I wouldn't force your voice deep. It sounds really cheesy.
06-28-2012, 12:45 AM
Thanks! I'll keep that in mind.
06-28-2012, 12:47 AM
Now you post on my Demo Reel xD (It's 3 lines).
07-05-2012, 12:01 AM
07-06-2012, 01:09 AM
Hey Ryan, (Your real name's Ryan right?)
I must start off with saying i thought your shouting characters and higher pitched characters are in my opinion well done, infact i can even imagine you playing a villainous and slightly de-ranged characters. What's odd to me is although there was slight popping and cracking on some lines, it wasn't on the ''Shouty'' lines so well done!!.
What i will say as a general observation rather than a critique is that 'Jorrich' to me it seemed like were maybe forcing your voice to go deeper than your vocal cords were prepared to go. I mean does it hurt or anything when you do those voices for 4 hours? Maybe something to work on? :).
My main critque to you would be in all honesty you could definitely improve the believablity in some of the more emotional characters, I mean i just didn't believe the character at around the 40sec mark. Your acting there could use alittle work. I find it helps when playing or auditioning for a character who's upset or down that picturing the animation or the play or whatever out in my mind (In a wierd way like a google maps senario) and then zoom in on the character and ask 'why is he as a character reacting this way?' and 'what's happened to him up to this point?'.
But again there were characters and lines in there (example your kind of villainous sidekick type character at around 1.20), that a=in my opinion i totally wanna see.
Anyway, I hope i've been helpful in these ramblings. :D
07-06-2012, 01:34 AM
Thank you so much! And yes I do have a lot of trouble with the sad emotional scenes and my lower voice but I have been working on them. It's really hard for me to get that believability from my voice for some reason. But thank you for the great advice that really helps me! :) Lol and yes I have a lot of fun with the yelling and villainous characters :evil:
07-13-2012, 02:24 AM
07-19-2012, 12:49 AM
Bumping for more critiques
08-19-2012, 11:02 PM
loved this! i got so scared and creeped out at the second-to-last voice character. xD
09-03-2012, 02:43 AM
Thank you! :) Bump.
09-11-2012, 05:24 AM
You're really quite good at screaming lines (always a pain for for me to do) I really liked the voices which were close to your normal tone of voice compared to the voices tried out in the lower registers. Just practice the low voices a bit more so that it sounds a little more convincing and also lowers your natural tone a little too so that low voices become easier to manipulate at any time. Just a suggestion though. ^_^ A great first demo, really! :)
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