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Astraeus
03-04-2012, 07:52 PM
Geez, this took an eternity to mix. -.-
A HUMONGOUS thank you to Strawberryfairy for the collaboration!
You did an awesome job! *pats head*
Constructive critism appreciated as well as compliments... hehehe!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8000g3KHpes&feature=youtu.be
Lyrics
1.Verse:
How much do you still expect me to shout and how loud?
How much do you still expect me to cry? Dry my eyes!
Dreadful calamities lurk around, put my luck to rout.
Recklessly my bracing dreams are shut away from me.
Aimlessly I cross the darkness in my way,
As a sudden ray of hope shifts night to day.
It ignites the ash of crimson fire in my heart and shatters sadness into countless shards.
Chorus:
I beg you,
Black Rock Shooter,
bring back bliss to my sight.
Finally, rescue me. Seal my destiny!
Black Rock Shooter,
guide me back to the light.
I wish upon a star that you will cast all my doubts away.
You know you are my heroine, so call out for my name!
Trivial Serenity
03-04-2012, 08:06 PM
First!
But in all seriousness good job. This is probably my favorite set of lyrics from you, Astrae.
TheStrawberryFairy
03-04-2012, 08:08 PM
Never sounded so cool XD thanks for all your hard work Astraeus :) I hope to work with you again in the future.
I haven't stopped singing this since you sent it to me XD grr its a good thing its awesome :p
Astraeus
03-04-2012, 09:13 PM
First!
But in all seriousness good job. This is probably my favorite set of lyrics from you, Astrae.
Thanks so much! :D Actually I have to thank you, because if I'm honest you always help me with writing my lyrics. xD
Never sounded so cool XD thanks for all your hard work Astraeus :) I hope to work with you again in the future.
I haven't stopped singing this since you sent it to me XD grr its a good thing its awesome :p
Ur voice is so gorgeous, can't wait to collaborate with you again!
Astraeus
03-05-2012, 06:28 PM
Buuuump~ <3
tehnoobydude
03-05-2012, 06:31 PM
You....are.....INCREDIBLE @.@
You should get more in the Vocaloid parts of youtube and cover then in English, you're by far a LOT better than a lot of "popular" youtube singers out there o.e
Astraeus
03-05-2012, 07:04 PM
You....are.....INCREDIBLE @.@
You should get more in the Vocaloid parts of youtube and cover then in English, you're by far a LOT better than a lot of "popular" youtube singers out there o.e
Straw, did you read that? xDD
Thanks a bunch! I'm sure Straw is very happy about your super lovely comment. LOL
The next cover we gonna do is a Vocaloid cover! xD
TheStrawberryFairy
03-05-2012, 07:26 PM
I'm really happy >< thank you very much for your comment ^ ^
I only just got interested in vocaloid but I would love to do some more songs in that area :)
You already know how great I think this collaboration is Astraeus, but I'll say again great work you two! StrawberryFairy sounds absolutely wonderful and your mixing is impeccable (I assume you mixed). Superb, would listen again x100!
Astraeus
03-05-2012, 08:10 PM
You already know how great I think this collaboration is Astraeus, but I'll say again great work you two! StrawberryFairy sounds absolutely wonderful and your mixing is impeccable (I assume you mixed). Superb, would listen again x100!
Hgnnh!
Thank you so much~
Ur so kind. Q___Q
MeroMeroSaharade
03-06-2012, 11:48 PM
YESH PRETTY PONYYY!! SO PRETTYYYY!!!! :D //dies
This is really good. What a pretty voice! (: This is a really hard song to sing, but she did it wonderfully. The lyrics are awesome, too!
Xephon0930
03-07-2012, 12:01 AM
Wow,this is so well done lyrics and vocals-wise. I'd love to hear more from you Astreus.
saru4life
03-07-2012, 05:35 AM
Holy crap STRAWBERRY THAT'S YOU?!! I didn't know you could sing!! Girl, you owned it! Great job, the two of you. Everything is fantastic, I can't stop listening to it!! <3 LOVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Astraeus
03-08-2012, 08:48 PM
Thank you so much! I really, really appreciate your comments.
*Is working on a cover of Aoi Shiori at the moment*
So stay tuned! <3
Eryngo
03-09-2012, 07:37 PM
I love it~! Your lyrics are lovely and her voice is as well~ I listened to it multiple times~
I'm actually writing English Lyrics for this song and was planning to cover it~ :'D
My lyrics are as good as yours, bet hey~ hahah
Your mixing is nice too~ Great Job you two~ :3
AmyAnn
03-09-2012, 07:56 PM
I really enjoyed this. I honestly had no idea Strawberry could sing so it was a nice surprise.
A few things that I picked up on, though.
Some of the timing was a bit off at parts and lagged behind so they could have been cut more to the timing. Also, the ending parts of the lyrics seem quite fast [the second last line in particular] and closed in. The lyrics are very well written but sometimes it was difficult to make them out clearly enough.
Harmonies, spot on. [I can never do harmonies lol]
That is me majorly nitpicking, though.
Astraeus
03-09-2012, 08:18 PM
I love it~! Your lyrics are lovely and her voice is as well~ I listened to it multiple times~
I'm actually writing English Lyrics for this song and was planning to cover it~ :'D
My lyrics are as good as yours, bet hey~ hahah
Your mixing is nice too~ Great Job you two~ :3
Thank you! :D
I really enjoyed this. I honestly had no idea Strawberry could sing so it was a nice surprise.
A few things that I picked up on, though.
Some of the timing was a bit off at parts and lagged behind so they could have been cut more to the timing. Also, the ending parts of the lyrics seem quite fast [the second last line in particular] and closed in. The lyrics are very well written but sometimes it was difficult to make them out clearly enough.
Harmonies, spot on. [I can never do harmonies lol]
That is me majorly nitpicking, though.
Okay, thank you so much for the helpful advice!
I'll keep that in mind.^^
Ughhh, got another dislike from somebody. This really hurts. Q__Q
Eryngo
03-09-2012, 08:23 PM
Ughhh, got another dislike from somebody. This really hurts. Q__Q
It's good to just pay attention to how many people like it rather than getting down by the people who don't~ <33 :3
It's okay~! It's great~! **Hug**
Astraeus
03-09-2012, 08:44 PM
Awww, but I'm really hurt by the fact that people think that I suck. .___.
I put so much effort on that project.
Well, thanks though!
raz1289
03-11-2012, 06:42 AM
lol don't worry about the dislikes, there's always going to be haters. But I think both the singing and mixing job were great, especially the harmonies. Good job you two!
Astraeus
03-11-2012, 10:42 PM
Sankyu so much! :)
Guess I have to get used to haters from now on. xD
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