TheCreator9464's really short and really limited First ever Voice Demo

[TheCreator9464]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdJHRPCL39g&feature=plcp&context=C32e5f54U DOEgsToPDskKB23FlMKhTfLuM9wRHHh39

Hope you guys don't kill me or whatever for having a horrible voice.



(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdJHRPCL39g&feature=plcp&context=C32e5f54UDOEgsToPDskKB23FlMKhTfLuM9wRHHh39 )

[Darklink401]

don't think I ever gave a thorough critique of this when u first showed me it, so here goes

Xanxus - Smexy as always.
Lelouch - If you let your inner voice out I'll think you're JYB
Cpt. Jack Sparrow - ...hmm...not feelin it, but I've seen worse
Roy - again, needs inner voice, but tone is pretty damn good

=3

[Chrisiscool86]

So, here's my critique. Hope it helps!

1st voice - Yeah, this is not that bad. I think you're trying too hard for the voice. Try enunciating more and just overall, opening your mouth more while speaking.

2nd - Okay, this is what a lot of beginning amateurs do. You're doing the "fake whisper yelling/screaming". Gotta get rid of that. I know..there can be issues with parents and whatnot. But you've got to really project. And again, just enunciate more. It seems you're afraid to project your voice out. Can't be afraid of your voice.

3rd - Same deal. Probably on all of these. Project and enunciate, man. It'll go miles. And try more for Johnny's laid back, drunken tone as well.

4th - Um...you need a lot more energy on that line. A LOT more. He's supposed to be making this huge deal out of the whole tiny miniskirts deal. You need to capture that.

All in all. There's a lot of work that can be done here. If you would like more assistance with a demo reel. Feel free to PM me sometime :)