Love is War (piano version) Hatsune Miku Covered by Kaye

[Akikoyono]

http://youtu.be/uVdSb2Qvo-4

This is a cover I did of 'Love is war'. It's the piano version because I think it's a very beautiful cover.

My native language is English and I speak some Japanese but I'm never really sure if I'm singing/saying things correctly.

Please let know what you think. I really could use some constructive feed back.

[Ragtime]

Wow, you really nailed that C#. Great job!
As far as constructive criticism goes, I really think you could benefit from really really really over-exaggerating those dynamics. I know you used them to some extent, but it'd help tap into how beautiful the piece (and your rendition of it) is if you got low and intense on the beginnings of those phrases, I mean really low, and then crescendoed into this blossoming huge forte towards the high notes, since you demonstrate in this cover that you can really do it.

All I'm saying is milk it for emotion and volume. That aside, your singing was really great and to me, the listener, the Japanese sounded fine so don't worry about it.

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd3/DanDLionY/bigavatar_rev5.png take it easy~!