PDA

View Full Version : Sky's the Limit [PERSONA 4 COVER]



SaigoSentinel
01-24-2012, 03:06 AM
Yeah. Critiques pl0x? I know the rap is weak, but I think it turned out decently, despite it's heavy engrish. XD


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AlhzrJmioyc&list=UUr0V2CtBas_Xid90OgF5ijg&feature=plcp

Mailorder
01-25-2012, 12:23 AM
Hmm, I actually liked your rap quite a bit! It was soft, but I could definitely feel an edginess that was just right. However, I feel that the delivery of the singing chorus section might have been too invested - the contrast from the rap caught me off-guard @0:35. Of course, I do understand that contrast can be a good thing. Perhaps it's the original song's male rapping and female singing that is burned in my head and makes it difficult to give your cover a stand-alone review, and I apologize for that, eheh...

SaigoSentinel
01-26-2012, 05:47 PM
Hmm, I actually liked your rap quite a bit! It was soft, but I could definitely feel an edginess that was just right. However, I feel that the delivery of the singing chorus section might have been too invested - the contrast from the rap caught me off-guard @0:35. Of course, I do understand that contrast can be a good thing. Perhaps it's the original song's male rapping and female singing that is burned in my head and makes it difficult to give your cover a stand-alone review, and I apologize for that, eheh...

I think you're thinking of "Beauty of Destiny" because this one has females on both the rapping and singing. Thanks for the critique, though! Yeah, I remember first hearing it and noticing the transition was a bit off. I'll keep that in mind. :D