Megurine Luki: ENGLISH BlackJack Dub by Philsterman01

[philsterman01]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0LXHM5ibj-k



Short song that I've been listening to from Luka...^^
Loved how the cover art turned out (I love Photoshop XD)

Mp3 Download:

http://www.4shared.com/mp3/it0Bl60s/BlackJack_English_Dub_redo.html

LYRICS:
I'll stop after this -one more time-
I'm so sick of it I'll throw it away --one more time-
But before I do I'll try it again --one more time-
Cuz I'm the guy who'll make you feel good

Red noise rips the moonlight up into shreds
Shouts that echo through the streets one more time
Now just bring those cold and lonely lips up to mine
And we'll see what lies start to flow

Suddenly you feel a new sensation
You're worried you need an intervention
As you swoon, you lit up my affection
Figure out what you want

Finally you see your contradiction
And blindly you loved my compensation

Now let's destroy everything
Come now let's get crazy

Now that your chained down like a dog go wild, lash back at me
Before you glare at reality --one more time-
Now your feelings burst into 52 pieces there's one I want to find
Now tell me where the Blackjack will hide

Calmly I had noticed what your missing
Your trying to fill your void with lusting
But all I can do is just pick you up you'll be alone tomorrow

Finally you get used to obeying
Just trust me I always end up winning
Now you have lost everything

Right now you have cut yourself just chasing after fantasies
Now before you fall apart inside --one more time-
Look back on what you crushed the deck of cards that you just blew over
This song is just for you you loser...

[Astraeus]

Wow, did you draw the picture? Amazing!
I really like your speaking voice.
The singing was nice, but your mic fails sometimes when you sing louder.
Some tones are not perfectly sung, but since the song is probably hard to sing you did a nice job.

[philsterman01]

Wow, did you draw the picture? Amazing!
The singing was nice, but your mic fails sometimes when you sing louder.


Thanks for the critique!
I actually didn't draw it...just the extra photoshop work ^^; (I wish I could draw that well)
and the mic fail was a highpass and flanger I added for special effect, I tried to make it more noticeable...I guess it didn't work >__<

[Astraeus]

No, for example 0:35 sounds good.
At 1:47 your mic fails I think.
(You sing the 'everything' perfectly though!)
But If you say you did that on purpose, sorry~