Demo Reel 2012

[FanDubGurl123]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GlmwusozsoQ

hey guys! its been a while! I am posting a new reel I have made! Im sorry if the acting isnt at my best! I did try thought! : D * critique is welcome*

voices: ( done by me)
mixing: ( done by me)

[FanDubGurl123]

*bumpty bump*

[Akumaryu]

I didn't really have a problem with this so much as I just don't feel like I have an accurate representation of what you can do. A lot of screaming and/or over-the-top deliveries throughout, but we didn't really get anything other than screaming, shouting, and gasping. Several of your "lines" consisted of either repeated words or lacked words at all. It would be a better idea to have your demo reel show off a wide range of emotions, from sad, to happy, to angry, etc., but to also include different intensities of these emotions. Not everything needs to be over-the-top; sometimes a subtle read can be more effective than something shouted or screamed. Like I said, there wasn't anything wrong with what you have here, per se, it just feels like a stunted presentation that doesn't fully inform the listener of what you can do.

Keep at it! :D