[WrBl] The One Piece Project - The Forbidden Rumble Clip Up!

[Ryusuke]

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Before he was executed, the legendary Pirate King Gold Roger revealed that he had hidden the treasure One Piece somewhere in the Grand Line. Now, many pirates are off looking for this legendary treasure to claim the title Pirate King. One pirate, Monkey D. Luffy, is a boy who had eaten the Devil's Fruit and gained rubber powers. Now he and his crew are off to find One Piece, while battling enemies and making new friends along the way.

Credits

Director/Casting/Producer :: Ryusuke
Logo :: Tonberry King

----- Clip-related credits are included in their respective clips. ----------

Straw Hat Pirates

Monkey D. Luffy :: Ryusuke / BigTUnit1 (Unlimited Adventure & Tactic)
Roronoa Zoro :: hyperknees91 / BladeBlur (Unlimited Adventure & Tactic)
Nami :: SS-chan / ElliottSkywalker (Unlimited Adventure)
Usopp :: Shift
Sanji :: Cettoto
Tony Tony Chopper :: AderuMoro / ebiichigo (Tactic) / Magic Kaito (Unlimited Adventure, Truth, Bink's)
Nico Robin :: SakasaJinei / SacredTear (Tactic) / Refi-chan (Unlimited Adventure)
Franky :: Break_The_Age
Brook :: Armago24

Clips

Watch with headphones for the best audio quality.

New!

The Forbidden Rumble
http://youtu.be/GjeolNutu5s
Full-Screen Version: https://vimeo.com/63521551

Tactic 15
Vimeo (PW: kingofthepirates)

https://vimeo.com/55678246
Youtube
http://youtu.be/exputQAvhJ4


Old
Oldest to More Recent

Unlimited Adventure

http://vimeo.com/30580459
Stream (PW: kingofthepirates)
Download (http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FKQ8MKPJ)
We Are (only with Narration, no SFX)
Download/Stream (http://www.box.net/shared/3sxuapj87kivbfnackz6)

Bink's Sake
http://vimeo.com/30191884
Stream (Pass: kingofthepirates)
Download (http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1ZEEVRUM)
Full Song Download (no SFX)
Stream/Download (http://www.box.net/shared/dvk81c1f0929birroeir)

Gum Gum Spin...@_@
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7UjzfqHNMT8&feature=player_embedded
Note: This one's more of a boredom dub, but since this is One Piece too, I decided to put it in here. Pretty much the state I was in after I finished Bink's Sake. XD

Rampaging Age

http://vimeo.com/33898618
Stream (PW: kingofthepirates)
Download (http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FQJTH520)

More Clips to Come!

[BigTUnit1]

Loading video right now! I do have to apologize to everyone for having issues during the Bink's Sake clip, as life had a way of bum rushing me at that time, but seeing that it will meet fruition either way, I am pleased. I hope I get to play Luffy in the future with you fine voice actors, but even if I don't, it was great to work with some familiar faces and fresh talents, so I have no regrets in the end. Anyway, to the clip!

There were some audio level problems with some people sounding louder then others by a good margin (I started to annoy myself XD) but the music timing, lip flaps, and overall style of mixing was very solid. I love everyone's take on the character! It was good to hear Magic Kaito and Shift in their respectful roles again, and I thought everyone else did a great job giving me great fitting voices in each role. I can't wait to see more! On to Bink's Sake! Yohohohoho!

[Ryusuke]

Sorry to hear you were going through all that back then. If your schedule meets with the last 5 clips whenever they start production, I'd be more than happy to have you back as Luffy! :D

The loudness was probably due to me converting some of the mono recordings to stereo. The dynamic processing probably didn't help things much. You were already loud in your initial recordings and well...yeah. XD; I probably should have lowered the volume on the individual files. But, I'm glad you enjoyed it, Travis!

[OmegaOptimusSupreme]

Luffy: As a whole I found the acting to be very solid but as the clip went on I found the voice to be rather grating. All-in-all I'm not a big fan of the male voice for Luffy because many go into the high-pitched, scratchy territory which I find irritating. However, thats just my personal choice on Luffy's voice so don't pay to much mind to it.


Zoro: While I found the voice appropriate enough you did sound somewhat muffled. Now I'm not quite sure if it was a quality issue or a performence issue but if it is a latter I would say to speak up more when using that particular voice, though the exertion sounds and grunts sounded fine. Also I would've liked to hear the speaking voice a tad bit lower but again thats more of a personal choice.


Nami: While acceptable, overall I found the performence to be a bit lacking. I felt that the voice sounded too young and that the acting itself wasn't on par with Nami's character, usually coming off as sounding too "nice" or too "gentle". The best example being her "relief" line, the younger voice really makes itself known and there isn't very much emotion backing up the line negatively effecting the overall performence.


Usopp: Again an acceptable performence but the main drawback being not having "malleable energy". While the normal dialogue is fine, lines that require more energy or emotion tend to stay at the same level and don't give enough of an impact. Examples being Usopp's opening laugh and Usopp's lines in the crow's nest. However, the lines about being defensive about his nose and mother did come off strong though this does have the down side or making the rest of the performence feel weaker in comparison.


Sanji: Overall an alright performence acting wise for both normal and "lovestruck" Sanji. However, there were some consistency issues with the voice. You sometimes sounded slightly younger and some lines feel rather unnatural when spoken, sounding like you are just reading the lines and not acting the lines. Examples being "Impossible" and "If you can't eat it, we don't need it".


Chopper: While the voice and acting were fine the quality of your mic really took me out of the scene and was an incredible detriment to your performence.


Robin: As with Chopper your quality is a big hinderance to you. However, I also felt that the voice and the acting weren't up to par either. With the voice sounding far too young and the acting feeling very "empty".


Franky: A solid performence acting and voice wise though I do feel you needed more energy. This really shows during your "Oh hay, what the heck is that?" line.


Editing: There were some leveling issues with some lines coming in too soft or too loud. Also when Luffy was in the air shouting I would have added reverb just to give the line some extra oomph. SFX for the most part I feel were done rather well but again there were some leveling issues here and there.

[ElliottSkywalker]

[B][COLOR="orange"]Nami: While acceptable, overall I found the performence to be a bit lacking. I felt that the voice sounded too young and that the acting itself wasn't on par with Nami's character, usually coming off as sounding too "nice" or too "gentle". The best example being her "relief" line, the younger voice really makes itself known and there isn't very much emotion backing up the line negatively effecting the overall performence.


Yeah, I don't think this was my best performance either. I totally forgot about this clip and it's been so long since I've done my lines for it. If I remembered, I would have totally asked to redo them. Sorry about that guys. ^^'

[BladeBlur]

Zoro: While I found the voice appropriate enough you did sound somewhat muffled. Now I'm not quite sure if it was a quality issue or a performence issue but if it is a latter I would say to speak up more when using that particular voice, though the exertion sounds and grunts sounded fine. Also I would've liked to hear the speaking voice a tad bit lower but again thats more of a personal choice.


I do agree a 100% with me being muffled. I believed those lines were recorded late 09' early 10' so I admit back then, I was rusty, but yeah, enunciation is something I am working very hard on. As for the speaking voice it's a choice, but I can always try lower.

To be honest, I am just glad to see it's done because I know how much of a hard time Ryusuke had making it so good job for everyone. :D

[Gonax]

-kick a door down-
Man that was good!!!

[Break_The_Age]

Franky: A solid performence acting and voice wise though I do feel you needed more energy. This really shows during your "Oh hay, what the heck is that?" line.


Yeah I know, it was hard for me to use that voice without losing my breath back then but I think I can do it now with a little more effort.

Thank you for the critique! ^^

[Ryusuke]

Download link is up!

[Ryusuke]

And I've hit another roadblock. Bink's Sake will be delayed for a bit. But, for now, any other critiques out there?

[Ryusuke]

So after a year and a half of lack of resources, recasting, struggling with the mixing and such, it's finally done. I've also included a downloadable version of the song too.

Now before we get to the clip, here are stuff I can’t really control:
– The music skipping at the end of Bink's Sake, where Brook solo's.
– Japanese Yorki is playing under Gonax's Yorki
– You can hear the crowd while Laboon chirps (this one's on me though, I just took it from the instrumental to have a consistent sound rather than finding a different SFX)
– Sony Vegas messing up the lip sync near the end of the clip. This program’s the spawn of the devil. :( It was in sync before I swear.

Vilapupu edited the instrumental for me, and this is all I could work with. And all things considered, I think he did all he can to make it presentable. If this effects your enjoyment of the clip at all, I'm sorry but this is the best I can do with what I have.

Ok, I’m done with the excuses now. Enjoy the clip! Or at least I hope you do. If not, ah, well. Throw down a critique. I could take a few punches. I'll just die a little inside, but what's one or two years off, right?
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Once the Straw Hats confirm, I'll get started on scripting the last clips...hopefully that'll go a lot smoother than these 5...

Now if you excuse me, I better lay down somewhere...

[Ryusuke]

One of my friends had trouble getting in, so I took out the password for now.

EDIT: ...on second thought, nvm...seems like he was having trouble with Javascript. *puts back password*

[Refi-chan]

Yay, finally Binks Sake! :3
My husband watched it with me and thought it was pretty well done! It looked pretty official to him, nice job.

[AnathJackson]

It was Fan~Tastic. Seemed very fun (until the end), and it was very catchy. The Chorus sounded wonderful, and all the individual voices that were meant to stand out (Brooke, Chopper, Usop, Frankie) were all glorious. Very well done sir.

[BladeBlur]

Ryusuke I know this has been a major bane for a year now but it was all worth it. Honestly aside the japanese vo' being heard at the end of the song I'd say it's one of your best works yet. Great job!

[Break_The_Age]

Ho...ly... shit. Dude pat yourself on the back because this was really well done! I enjoyed this from beginning to end and whatever you had to endure it was worth it! Congrats! Too bad you accidentally left in Yorki's Japanese voice at the end though, but hell that's okay! I still love it! xD

[Ryusuke]

Honestly aside the japanese vo' being heard at the end of the song

Too bad you accidentally left in Yorki's Japanese voice at the end though
It's not by accident. :sweat It was included in the edited karaoke Vilapupu provided me. He couldn't remove it. I tried replacing that segment by asking some of my composer friends, even looking for piano covers in Youtube and asking permission. They either said no, or they didn't respond/haven't been active in ages. :( So overlaying it was my only option...but it seems Sony Vegas had other ideas. >_> *grumble*

But, seriously though...I'm glad everyone so far loves this clip. Moreso that you guys were still able to enjoy it even with that glaring flaw near the end of the song. I've been through so much stress with this clip, so this puts me at ease even for a little bit. :)

Any more comments/critiques?

[Magic Kaito]

Yeah, considering the issue of not having the karaoke for this exact version of the song which led to the skipping/Japanese vo at the end, this was really well done. Being able to mix a song that well with a bunch of people recording on their own and bringing up the appropriate voices when they were focused on is very impressive!

Also from the comments I know there are issues with my mic. Hopefully I can get a new one when I'm done with school... For some reason it likes to peak a lot when I do Chopper's voice so it's either dealing with that or I have to back away a lot.

[Tomoyo Ichijouji]

Great job, Ryusuke! =D Just so you know, I downloaded the song onto my Droid and have played it back several times, including for my sister, who is a big fan of One Piece and thought it sounded really good (she complimented the fact that all the people knew how to sing XD ).

[BladeBlur]

This deserves a bump.

[Ryusuke]

Thanks for the bump, BB!


Yeah, considering the issue of not having the karaoke for this exact version of the song which led to the skipping/Japanese vo at the end, this was really well done. Being able to mix a song that well with a bunch of people recording on their own and bringing up the appropriate voices when they were focused on is very impressive!

Also from the comments I know there are issues with my mic. Hopefully I can get a new one when I'm done with school... For some reason it likes to peak a lot when I do Chopper's voice so it's either dealing with that or I have to back away a lot.

Great job, Ryusuke! =D
Glad you two liked it!


Just so you know, I downloaded the song onto my Droid and have played it back several times, including for my sister, who is a big fan of One Piece and thought it sounded really good (she complimented the fact that all the people knew how to sing XD ).
XD Nice.

[/bump in disguise]

[Ryusuke]

The first clip's back up and stuff. Bump for more critiques for UA or Bink's Sake. ....Gum Gum Spin doesn't really count, since it's a boredom clip, but hey critique that too, if you want.

[Ryusuke]

Rampaging Age is up! Hope you enjoy it!

Just a little note for One Piece folks that are this far in the show, "Valour" = "Haki." I know it's translated as "Ambition", but I thought the word would be too prevalent in the show. FUNimation came up with "Ambition Energy", but that's too generic. I've asked my friends, if there was anything appropriate and one them came with "Valour." Kind of akin to what some old RPGs call some status alignments, if I'm not mistaken.

[Refi-chan]

Wow, a lot of times I forgot I was watching a fandub through that. Great job!

[hyperknees91]

That was a great clip yall, I can't really critique the cast unfortunately because I am insanely biased towards the japanese cast (more so than any other show). But I will say that the acting was good, and the scenes were taken seriously and thus making them very enjoyable regardless. Nice job yall~

[Break_The_Age]

Loved it! Real professional work man! I love your attention to detail! Although some of the falling down sound effects around 1:34 felt a bit out of place to me, like it felt like the wrong kind of thud. But otherwise great! ^^

The actors did a great job too. I can't really nitpick at this! Great Job everyone! ^^

[Ryusuke]

That was a great clip yall, I can't really critique the cast unfortunately because I am insanely biased towards the japanese cast (more so than any other show). But I will say that the acting was good, and the scenes were taken seriously and thus making them very enjoyable regardless. Nice job yall~
Aw. lol Well, I don't blame you. The Japanese VAs ARE the characters voices. But, I'm glad you enjoyed it.


Wow, a lot of times I forgot I was watching a fandub through that. Great job!
Glad you enjoyed it!


Loved it! Real professional work man! I love your attention to detail! Although some of the falling down sound effects around 1:34 felt a bit out of place to me, like it felt like the wrong kind of thud. But otherwise great! ^^

The actors did a great job too. I can't really nitpick at this! Great Job everyone! ^^
I agree, but that was all I could find. :sweat ...then again I probably could have used the Dragon Ball "fall" sfx more. I was kinda of worried it'd be repetitive. Ah, well. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Ryusuke]

Yeah...bumping this again for more feedback.

[Ryusuke]

I'll update the download links back up as soon as I find a suitable place to upload these clips. In other news, there will be a clip sometime next month or so. [/bump for more feedback]

[MeroMeroSaharade]

The opening sounds wonderful!!! <3<3

[Ryusuke]

Glad you enjoyed it!

Well, I'm having trouble finding alternate download links, so I guess I'll be sticking with unlisted Youtube vids and password protected Vimeo vids from now on. Ah well. Bump.

[Ryusuke]

HE ACTUALLY UPLOADED A ONE PIECE CLIP!? It REALLY is the end of the world! QUICK! Hide your children! No, but seriously, hope you guys enjoy. Thanks again to the cast.

[hyperknees91]

I liked it~

Though I believe the voice volume was a bit too high. The music and sfxs were in good harmony with each other but the voices seemed amped up really high in comparison.

I'm not really sure on the Franky voice, doesn't quite sound wierd enough to me (a little too drill sergeant ish), but eh bias.

[Ryusuke]

Alrighty, I'll upload another version on vimeo with that fixed. Thanks for the watch dude!

[Ryusuke]

Uploaded the dub on vimeo with lower volume on the voices. Yeah. https://vimeo.com/55678246

[Ryusuke]

Bump for some more critiques and stuff.

[Ryusuke]

Unfortunately, I had to do some recasts. Good news, the project is finally got some legs. The Forbidden Rumble is finally up! Enjoy/critique/yeah!

[Gonax]

that latest clip, was tzight!

[Ryusuke]

Thank ye, sir. Bump.