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Bgilbert
06-06-2011, 07:01 AM
NEW!

Same VA track, but this time with a soundtrack to go along with it!


Please let me know your thoughts.


Thank you!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nE1j5jVDITs
Bgilbert
06-08-2011, 02:20 AM
*23 views*
*No comments*
*foreveralone*
himynameisrob53
06-08-2011, 02:28 AM
Great job, as always!
Bgilbert
06-09-2011, 01:58 AM
Great job, as always!

Thanks!

Still looking for comments guys! Let me know what yall think!
Bgilbert
06-12-2011, 06:40 AM
coming close to 100 views! But only one comment :( I need YOUR help to help me grow as a preformer!

Let me know what you guys think
Bgilbert
06-14-2011, 06:04 PM
*tumbleweed*
Zammuel
06-14-2011, 06:07 PM
You have very clear audio and a very easy to listen to voice, great work.

(P.S. I feel your pain on the view count thing haha).
Bgilbert
06-15-2011, 10:59 PM
You have very clear audio and a very easy to listen to voice, great work.

(P.S. I feel your pain on the view count thing haha).


Thank you I appreciate it. Anyone else?
Monotori
06-16-2011, 06:35 PM
My biggest problem: do not pronounce the 'h' in heir!

But seriously, what I really like is, no matter what the character, you keep a clear, understandable voice with just the right tempo. I was really looking for something a bit more, though, like you could've gone just a couple extra steps. None of the lines really stood out to me; they were executed well, but I couldn't believe them. Specifically, I think using that first line in the beginning was a bad idea. It doesn't grab anyone's attention and (if I were looking for an actor at the last minute or something) I might just skip over the rest because it gave a bad impression, as if all your voices are just as dull. That isn't true! They might be a little disappointing sometimes, but definitely dynamic in their own ways. It seems like you know how the lines should sound, you're just holding yourself back!
Just keep at it, though; I like the characters you've made, they just need more life to them.
Bgilbert
06-16-2011, 10:37 PM
My biggest problem: do not pronounce the 'h' in heir!

But seriously, what I really like is, no matter what the character, you keep a clear, understandable voice with just the right tempo. I was really looking for something a bit more, though, like you could've gone just a couple extra steps. None of the lines really stood out to me; they were executed well, but I couldn't believe them. Specifically, I think using that first line in the beginning was a bad idea. It doesn't grab anyone's attention and (if I were looking for an actor at the last minute or something) I might just skip over the rest because it gave a bad impression, as if all your voices are just as dull. That isn't true! They might be a little disappointing sometimes, but definitely dynamic in their own ways. It seems like you know how the lines should sound, you're just holding yourself back!
Just keep at it, though; I like the characters you've made, they just need more life to them.


Thanks for the review!

I showcased the first few because they were preformed in an actual studio. I was unsure about the quality, and I wanted to get that across first.

I can definitly see what you're talking about though. My lines tend to end flat. I'm starting to get more confident in my voice and characters. it's like know how to create the picture, but only been stopping at sketches.

Thanks again for your critque.
Bgilbert
07-09-2011, 05:57 PM
(Necro)

Building a new demo soon, hopefully for otakon, so shootin for any other advice/critiques before I make a new one
Astraia
07-15-2011, 05:36 AM
Hey this is nice! Good job! :)
x3Ren
06-10-2012, 05:56 AM
Wow. You sound amazing! And I love it when your voice sounds all cowardly. I can really imagine it. xD
Bgilbert
06-11-2012, 06:21 PM
Thank you! This one is rather outdated at this point, a new one is in the works (Along with professionally done one, some time in the near future)

Thank you for your support!
Jinjuuryuu
06-14-2012, 03:14 AM
At least for the beginning of your demo, it feels a little forced. To make it sound more realistic, you always have to push it a little more with the intonations. It's only missing a little humph! Right now it sounds like your doing it to 7

For your new demo, kick it up to ten my friend and you'll be on your way for an excellent demo! (Your 2011 is good but you can make it great!)

An advice for you, check out professional demos like Crispin Freeman's and try to imitate it a little, it can be great practice!