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ElliottSkywalker
03-13-2011, 09:29 AM
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Action/Adventure/War/Edge-Of-Your-Seat AWESOMENESS



CHAPTER ONE
In the Beginning...

By: ElliottSkywalker
Edited By: Willow Wood

Narrator: Willow Wood
Taylor Wilson: ElliottSkywalker
Michael Thune: Daglot Alta

WARNING: Remember, usually the first chapters are a little boring, BUT, I can assure you, there will be PLENTY more action/adventure lurking in the depths of this story. Also, I will be casting more characters in the future. If you are interested, contact me about it. Not sure if I will host an audition thread on it, but if you contact me, I will give you a list of characters you can audition for, and we'll see from there. Thank you so much for your interest, and without further adieu, I present to you ON THE EVE OF DEFEAT Ch. 1.


ON THE EVE OF DEFEAT Ch. 1 (http://www.box.net/shared/v1l5g7r04g)
Duration: 8:20


Ch. 1 Summary (NO SPOILERS, not really) xP :
It’s midday and Taylor Wilson and Michael Thune, two teen soldiers, are out on a dangerous mission. A mission to which they aren't assigned to. Taylor is aware of this but Mike is not. Cutting through heavy plants and shrubs, they proceeded forth on their quest to take down the Paragon Rebellion. Taylor knows that by going at this alone with Mike, they might not make it out alive, but they know this will raise a red flag for the Claymore Alliance. *(The Paragon Rebellion is known to be an evil organization. Having waged war on the Claymore Alliance, they have lost much; including Claymore’s strongest fighter. But if they can defeat Paragon and move in on their territory, the odds will be in their favor.)*The Alliance wasn’t planning to strike until dawn, but Taylor, as stubborn as she is, refuses to wait that long. She has a feeling something will go wrong long before then. Now is her time to attack. Michael, on the other hand, is under the impression that they are under the Lieutenant’s orders to venture out into the (now) Paragon’s territory, so he tagged along without hesitation. Armed with a World War II Fairbairn Commando Dagger and an 1873 Colt they struggle, making their way down the steep mountain on the way towards the Paragon Rebellion.

Audioplay Budget: Around $8.00 (on sfx)

SFX By
iTunes

Music
Legends of the Fall - By: Enya


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CAST LIST
Narrator: Willow Wood
Michael Thune: Daglot Alta
Taylor Wilson: ElliottSkywalker
General Balthazar: LordCrehavos9000
Soldier 1: Konturo
Soldier 2: Gir
Soldier 3: Dark2Ganny

https://www.box.com/s/4f7ee8e1ce5fff64f0b4
DURATION: 14:00


Chapter 2 SFX Budget
$15

Music
Stay Gold (Instrumental) by Carmine Coppola
Kill Zone by Parters in Rhyme
Face to Face by Alan Silvestri
Dally's Death Scene by Carmine Coppola
Sound of Silence by Piano Piano

SFX
iTunes

Daglot Alta
03-13-2011, 03:38 PM
i am so sorry about my mic at the begging holy crap did realize it was that messed up when you mentioned it

ElliottSkywalker
03-13-2011, 03:53 PM
HOLY CRAP I LOVE YOUR SIGNATURE!! And, ok. Yeah, I kinda figured that the mic was a little messed up, but when you said you re-listened to the lines and they were fine, I was kinda like "Oook. If you say so." LOL But yeah, feel free to redo them, OH, and I think I found a voice type for him. Don't make him as this wimpy kid, give him some more maturity. He needs to be respectful, as do all soldiers. So, if you can, use your normal voice or something close to that. THANKSSSS!! :D

ElliottSkywalker
03-13-2011, 08:36 PM
And a better version has been uploaded!! Take a listen, shall we? :P

mooglephish
03-13-2011, 08:47 PM
Brilliant song choice! You mixed this really well. Great work, Miss. Skywalker. It's really hard not to hear Erin's voice though. I'm so used to your voice from the Angelus audio book. XD Your acting is awesome though. I couldn't imagine some of the lines sounding natural, but you guys totally aced them. <3

ElliottSkywalker
03-14-2011, 03:02 AM
Thank you sooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, I, myself was kinda iffy about a lot of them but I am VERY impressed at how everyone's lines turned out!!! This makes me very proud of all of youuuu!! <3

ElliottSkywalker
06-21-2012, 03:23 AM
CHAPTER TWO IS NOW RELEASED!!!
Now with more characters and more to be added on very soon!!!

Comments and Critiques are much appreciated!

Thank you so much to my lovely voice actors who helped make chapter two a possibility!

LordCrehavos
06-22-2012, 07:07 AM
Just phenomenal, truly. Everyone was so fantastic! The only issue, like I said before, was the audio peaking and inconsistency for the lines but the performances outweigh that! Excellent work!!!

mooglephish
07-06-2012, 06:13 PM
Late reply is late because I fail.

Nicely edited together with great choice in sound effects. The music could do with being a little quieter and the track at the beginning could have faded out sooner to build up the tention, but you're great at mixing otherwise. And your acting, as always, is superb.

Adam
08-10-2012, 04:24 AM
It's pretty good. The acting is rather solid. I'd have a more in depth review if I wasn't so exhausted. I may just end up editing that in.