Shattered Reflections [Ep 1, Part 1 Up!]

[Subaru-camui]

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Synopsis: Subaru has been tormented by his first love and by his curse of being turned into a Vampire. Now they must stop the Vamps lord from creating a vamps army to bring udder distruction:
Subplot: Shigure has been in love with Subaru since he first laid eyes on him, now he is determined to mend Subaru's broken heart.



Part 1: DOWNLOAD/STREAM (http://www.4shared.com/audio/pWXzkXRl/Shattered_Reflections_part_1.html)



Characters:


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Subaru Mommotto: Philsterman01
Age: 17
Subaru is a loving teenager with love on his mind. After his first love betrayal he has shut his heart to new relationships. He was turned into a vampire by a man named Nathaniel and now he and his friends are on the search to find him and turn Subaru back to normal.


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Shiichi: Heaven's Incarnate
Age: Unknown
Shiichi is known as Subaru's othe half, the angel of death. He is the voice inside of Subaru's head and the brains behind hs transformation form.


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Subito Mommotto: LunarArtemis
Age: 17
Subito is Subaru's twin sister, she is as loving as he brother. She would be considered the older sister in their relationship. Ever since the incident with Subaru happened she is determined to keep him safe and to make sure that they find Nathaniel. He angel form is the Angel of Life.


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Andrew Honjou: Undermy7train
age: 17
Andrew is a natural born rocker who has been friends with the Mommotto twins for years. As a foster child he has always been considered family, his angel form is the Angel of Light.


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Miki Kyushuu: DurchxDenxMonson
Age: 16
Miki is the sweet younger sister of Shigure Kyushu, the science teacher of theirhigh school, she is Subau's newest fiend and their newest allies. Miki is the Angel of Love


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Shigure Kyushu: Rahne
Age: 22
Shigure took in Subito and Andew a little while after Subau had left to find work. When he first saw Subaru it was love at first sight, now he is determined to make him fall in love again. Shigure is the Angel of Hate.


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Count Rei: Bree
Age: Unknown
Count Rei is the oveseer of the Angels and the Vamps, and he is completely in love with Subaru~

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Abiko: McTricky
Age: 19
Abiko use to work with Subaru at a part time job with Nathaniel as their boss. Abiko had been jealous of Nathaniel's and Subaru's relationship and now he has dedicated his life to protecting Subaru, no matter the cost.




OP Song:
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Satsuki: Awake

ED Song:
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Vamps: Sweet Deams



Extra's:

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[Adam]

This is pretty good so far.

The only things I feel are worth pointing out are the audio levels between the characters and some slight confusion about the rules of your vampire universe.

There's a few instances where I can hear one character speaking and then the next one to speak is so low I can barely hear them. I would suggest for the next episode you work on some of the audio balancing. While it's understandable that some levels may be off, you want to try and get them close enough together that it doesn't become an obvious shift in leveling.

I'm slightly confused, Subaru is a vampire as this story begins right? But he's waking up in the morning and going to school? I think? I was a bit confused, is this following more of a "Twilight" esque vampire rule setting where sun light has no effect on vampires whatsoever?

Either way, I think it's a good start and I'll look out for more!

[Subaru-camui]

....ok, so how it works is it is NOTHING like Twlight...The vamps in this world have evolved to the point where if they are still half human, like Subaru then the sunlight cannot hurt him, when he was turned into a vamps he wasn't drained enough to make him a full vampire, so thats why here i call them vamps, they are just more evolved. and sorry about the audio levels, this was started about a year in a half ago and some mic qualities are better than others.

[Subaru-camui]

bump~ :3!!!