Mages Catalyst - Episode 1 out

[Silver Fox]

Story (short version): The Sages Stone. It is the ingredient that can amplify a Mages powers to the ultimate level. However, very few can actually control the stone. Many who have tried were killed as soon as they touched it and the ones that returned had got completely crazy from being near the stone.

Episode 1 (http://www.4shared.com/audio/yWOZghNR/Mages_Catalyst_Episode_1.html)

Cast (order of Appearance):

Young Kirsa: Nico (nickelnick5)
Mother: Artemis Wasabi
Young Xaver: DemonFoxAkira
Soldier 1: Arklight
Soldier 2: Arklight
Father: Ian Fox (Daglot Alta)
Soldier 3: Tanja Milojevic (LightningBolt)
Soldier 4: Ian Fox (Daglot Alta)
Soldier 5: Ian Fox (Daglot Alta)
Kirsa: Sayuri Maebara (pickle131)
Xaver: Kevyn Andreyasn
Woman 1: Artemis Wasabi
Belenos: Sikono
Octavius: Gadrius
Marsh: Hari (Hari26)
Rain: Tanja Milojevic (LightningBolt)

SFX from VAA Library and Sounddogs

Music from Freeplaymusic.com and .hack OST

[Arklight]

It's here! It's here! It's finally here! I just hope we get listeners. ;P If I feel like it I may make a full critique for anybody who'd appreciate it. But still, I feel as if I did a good job here and I hope my full time character appears soon! ^^

[pickle131]

Uwah! *U* I really loved this. The mixing was really good, especially during the first part. I really loved the first few minutes, they were so well done and exciting *U* Though I loved the rest of it as well~ All the voices were so well done, and there were only a few lines I thought were a bit off. It always amazes me when people can bring characters to life just by using their voice and still give them such personality. This is only my second radioplay style production I was in, but I'm really loving these *U* They're so unique and wonderful, and the stories are always so amazing! The only sad part is they don't get as many listeners D: If you want, once I get my tablet back and draw a picture, I can post each episode on my youtube account (or even a video with a link to it) and put a link here. It might get more listeners that way C:

[Kevyn Andreyasn]

Wow. I really need to get a better mic. Or better technique. Or something. But yeah, the rest was awesome. There were some really cool effects, but I don't think the background music always fit perfectly. Still, really great job everyone.

[pickle131]

Wow. I really need to get a better mic. Or better technique. Or something. But yeah, the rest was awesome. There were some really cool effects, but I don't think the background music always fit perfectly. Still, really great job everyone.
Try holding the mic to the side of your head instead of the front c: (If you hold it in front of your mouth it sometimes catches puffs of ir and stuff, I used to have that problem a lot xD) It will really help a lot and you might not have to get a new mic 8D

[Arklight]

You really don't need an AMAZING mic for it to sound good. I did the whole thing with a Rock Band mic. :3

[pickle131]

XD! So I'm not the only one who uses those!!!

[Megane]

O.O a race to an all powerful stone? My interest is piqued. I can't really critique cause I'm only a beginner myself but from what I heard everything was great.
Can't wait for the next installment!

[Silver Fox]

XD Thank you all for the critiques (even if some weren't! XD ) Sorry I didn't reply sooner... been a bit busy with school! more comments would be appriceated from other users! DX

[Arklight]

Bump for critique! Pweeze?

[Arklight]

As Silver Fox is no longer with us and the link appears to be down, here is a download link for the first episode of Mages Catalyst. Rest in peace Silver Fox. Thank you for giving me my first chance.
http://www.mediafire.com/?q38qhe26d9jbrmd

[Hari26]

Yes, I would like a critique too! Also, why is this in the fan completed work? This is an original radioplay. Also, it seems like Silver's mother deleted every account that silver made, which is why the link doesn't work anymore... ^^;