Aqua & Ven Fandub (Short Scene)

[CGNET]

YouTube - Aqua & Ventus Fandub: "Another Farewell"

Here comes another quick fandub video, which I created with Damaru, who plays as Aqua. As some of you may know, I also played as Ven in this fandub scene and just wanted some criticism if there is any or some suggestions you may feel that's necessary to give.

The scene takes place in Radiant Garden, which is noted for "another farewell."

Aqua: Voiced by Damaru
Ventus: Voiced by Mike (CGNET)

[hyperknees91]

Mm nice but I really think adding some background ambience (water flowing and possibly light wind) would make it feel a little less empty.

Also there are some higher quality foot step noises in the vaa library so I would also invest into grabbing some of those~

As for the voices yes your voice does fit ven well and you've greatly improved your acting since last time I heard. I think the only thing that really detracted was the noise behind your mic but thats ok you still did well with your line reads. Do a longer scene next time though I'd like to get a better feel for your ven in total because well he's my favorite kh char xD

Obviously damaru I prefer you to aquas english va (she was soooo horrid) and I didnt notice anything off, just well played in general. Guess if your gonna va more often I'll invest into buying you a better mic hah.

[Damaru]

Well that was short and sweet. :) I didn't know Jesse McCartney was in this. :P Haha nice job!


Obviously damaru I prefer you to aquas english va (she was soooo horrid) and I didnt notice anything off, just well played in general. Guess if your gonna va more often I'll invest into buying you a better mic hah.

FFFFFFFFF- you don't have to do that xD

[SonicTheVA]

This is pretty good. I already watched this on YouTube but I didn't leave a comment so I thought that I should just leave one here.

Mixing - Like hyperknees said, the mixing could have been better. You should have used different footsteps and add more SFX because it was a lot of SFX missing in the fandub. The music was a bit too loud and I think that you should change the audio level so the music won't drown your voice.

Ven - Like I said before, your natural voice really fits Ven and it sounded a lot like the original VA. Your acting is definitely improving ever since the first time I watched your older fandubs. My only complaints are that you weren't recording in a good room with less reverb. No offense but it sounded like you were in the basement when you did the lines and your mic picked up a lot of the echoes. I suggest you to record in a different room that has less echoes so it won't mess up the quality in your recordings. Other than that, good job! =D

Aqua - I really enjoyed this take for Aqua. I have to say that it sounded way more acceptable than her original VA (I wasn't too fond of her original voice, not to be rude =\). I don't think I have critiques that I should give you since you were reading the lines with correct emotions. All I have to say that good job and keep up the good work! =D

[CGNET]

Thanks guys. My mic is very bad, I just can't find a better one. Can anyone link me to some mics that are better for recording?
Also, as far as the sound effects, the original was done the same exact way. There wasn't any sounds of the fountains and etc.