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08-14-2010, 05:07 AM
I think this is the right place...
These are all Fullmetal Alchemist characters, some of which that I've been working on for a while. They're all works in progress and I'd love to hear some really helpful critiques so that I can buff them up nice and shiny for an audition. :)
YouTube- FMA: Brotherhood Voices
Here are the characters and lines from the producer, in the order I did them, for reference:
Nurse
Voice Description:
This nurse should have a medium to medium-high voice. She should sound kind and polite; I'm slightly thinking of a princessy voice here, but hey, play around with it, she only has about three lines lines.
Line 1:
*informing, questioning at the end* Ah, yes, Mr. Mustang's room is right down the hall. Would you like me to escort you, Mister...?
Old Lady
Voice Description:
A kind old lady who lives in Resembool, this lady has a medium to medium-high voice. Her voice is aged with wisdom and she sounds like a friendly old lady.
Line 1:
*a bit surprised, cheerful* Was that Edward? My, he sure does travel a lot. I don't know how you keep up with him.
Maria Ross
Voice Description:
Maria should have a medium to medium-low voice. I think I can take a medium-high one as well. She's pretty much your regular military woman with a mature, womanly voice.
Line 1:
*saluting* Oh, Dr. Knox, sir!
Line 2:
*questioning carefully* If you don't mind me asking, sir, uhh, is he...?
Gracia Hughes
Voice Description:
Gracia should have a motherly, kind voice. Her voice is medium to medium-high and mature. Just mostly think motherly here and you're fine.
Line 1:
*understanding* Oh, I see. So your brother's left leg is still the same, huh?
Line 2:
*happy, a bit sad* I'm glad your body's back to normal, Alphonse. He would be happy, too.
Line 3:
*questioning* Like the equivalent exchange in alchemy, right?
Selim Bradley
Voice Description:
Younger now, Selim has a little boy voice that should be baby-ish and cute. He should sound innocent, and not like the Pride we know him as. Girls and boys are free to voice him, though I think I'd prefer it more if a girl was voicing him. I'm considering self-casting as him if I find no one fit to voice him.
Line 1:
*sad* Mommy, the birdie's hurt...what can we do to help it?
Line 2:
*cheerful* Okay.
Line 3:
*giggles childishly*
Elysia Hughes
Voice Description:
Elysia should sound like a five-year-old girl with a high voice. She sounds childish and is always happy.
Line 1:
*giggles*
Line 2:
*curious* Hey Al, where's you little big brother?
Alphonse Elric
Voice Description:
No Maxey or Aaron for this one. Actually, considering how old he is now and stuff, I'm thinking he should sound like his age; a medium-high teenaged voice that's nice and smooth, a good guy voice. I'm thinking of something similar to Jason Liebrecht's take of Alfons Heidrich in the movie for the first series. But don't be discouraged girls; you can try out for him too, maybe I might like it more than the boys' take anyway.
Line 1:
*sighs, tired* I really feel beat. I had no idea I was that out of shape.
Line 2:
*cheerful* Nah, I'm fine. I want to go home on my own two legs. You can go ahead if you like, though. I'll catch up.
Line 3:
*cheerful* Hey Den! *laughs*
Line 4:
*concerned* I wonder if Mei's okay...
Line 5:
*determined* I decided I'm going to Xing. I'm going to study alchemy there with Mei. I'm not just going to Xing, either; I plan to travel and learn as much as I can. I want to see the world with my own eyes...my own two legs. *in nervous disbelief* But are you guys really coming with me?
These are all Fullmetal Alchemist characters, some of which that I've been working on for a while. They're all works in progress and I'd love to hear some really helpful critiques so that I can buff them up nice and shiny for an audition. :)
YouTube- FMA: Brotherhood Voices
Here are the characters and lines from the producer, in the order I did them, for reference:
Nurse
Voice Description:
This nurse should have a medium to medium-high voice. She should sound kind and polite; I'm slightly thinking of a princessy voice here, but hey, play around with it, she only has about three lines lines.
Line 1:
*informing, questioning at the end* Ah, yes, Mr. Mustang's room is right down the hall. Would you like me to escort you, Mister...?
Old Lady
Voice Description:
A kind old lady who lives in Resembool, this lady has a medium to medium-high voice. Her voice is aged with wisdom and she sounds like a friendly old lady.
Line 1:
*a bit surprised, cheerful* Was that Edward? My, he sure does travel a lot. I don't know how you keep up with him.
Maria Ross
Voice Description:
Maria should have a medium to medium-low voice. I think I can take a medium-high one as well. She's pretty much your regular military woman with a mature, womanly voice.
Line 1:
*saluting* Oh, Dr. Knox, sir!
Line 2:
*questioning carefully* If you don't mind me asking, sir, uhh, is he...?
Gracia Hughes
Voice Description:
Gracia should have a motherly, kind voice. Her voice is medium to medium-high and mature. Just mostly think motherly here and you're fine.
Line 1:
*understanding* Oh, I see. So your brother's left leg is still the same, huh?
Line 2:
*happy, a bit sad* I'm glad your body's back to normal, Alphonse. He would be happy, too.
Line 3:
*questioning* Like the equivalent exchange in alchemy, right?
Selim Bradley
Voice Description:
Younger now, Selim has a little boy voice that should be baby-ish and cute. He should sound innocent, and not like the Pride we know him as. Girls and boys are free to voice him, though I think I'd prefer it more if a girl was voicing him. I'm considering self-casting as him if I find no one fit to voice him.
Line 1:
*sad* Mommy, the birdie's hurt...what can we do to help it?
Line 2:
*cheerful* Okay.
Line 3:
*giggles childishly*
Elysia Hughes
Voice Description:
Elysia should sound like a five-year-old girl with a high voice. She sounds childish and is always happy.
Line 1:
*giggles*
Line 2:
*curious* Hey Al, where's you little big brother?
Alphonse Elric
Voice Description:
No Maxey or Aaron for this one. Actually, considering how old he is now and stuff, I'm thinking he should sound like his age; a medium-high teenaged voice that's nice and smooth, a good guy voice. I'm thinking of something similar to Jason Liebrecht's take of Alfons Heidrich in the movie for the first series. But don't be discouraged girls; you can try out for him too, maybe I might like it more than the boys' take anyway.
Line 1:
*sighs, tired* I really feel beat. I had no idea I was that out of shape.
Line 2:
*cheerful* Nah, I'm fine. I want to go home on my own two legs. You can go ahead if you like, though. I'll catch up.
Line 3:
*cheerful* Hey Den! *laughs*
Line 4:
*concerned* I wonder if Mei's okay...
Line 5:
*determined* I decided I'm going to Xing. I'm going to study alchemy there with Mei. I'm not just going to Xing, either; I plan to travel and learn as much as I can. I want to see the world with my own eyes...my own two legs. *in nervous disbelief* But are you guys really coming with me?