Vic Mignogna's Broly

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Basically a little something I threw together to keep myself from getting rusty :sweat Let me know what you think!

YouTube- Byakuyaownsyou's Broly: June 22nd,2010

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Bump!!!!!!!!

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Bump for Critiques!

[PsychoJak25]

okay here's what I thought, your broly needs a little more "UMPH" in your voice, like I could tell when you said "but it's still just a dream!" and also I noticed you said your dialogue a bit slow, I know broly's not much of a fast talker either, but he talks just a little bit faster then that. I also noticed a little stuttering/stammering, but just a little, so it's not a big problem.

I hope my critiquing helped!

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So diction issues got it! Anything about the voice itself?