Timmy1192
05-29-2010, 02:11 PM
YouTube- DanDubs Summer Reel 2010
Heres my newest reel, critique if you like ^^
Seymour
05-29-2010, 10:49 PM
nice to see you made your way to the VAA man, and believe me this was a good way to start off, even with the clannad fandub you helped in, you really were very impressive in that : )
Anyway, I suppose I should give some pointers, but honestly, I can't really find anything big, maybe just some tweaking on some delivery with "I've been for someone to kill" line, it was good, but I think it couldve been presented a bit differently to have a more fearful effect.
Though my personal favorites were
the first one (That was a great way to start off);
The second one, and the one commenting on the stars, both sounded very natural;
The scared and fearful one, it has that breakdown like fear to it, specially the scream at the end, it had that strain for it that really fit the emotion.
Anyway, with all that said and done, you left a good impression, and welcome to the VAA : )
Timmy1192
05-29-2010, 11:48 PM
Haha thanks Sensei! ^^ yeah i figured I should make one of these since I havent already XD and Alright i'll take that into consideration and im glad you liked those parts I did my best on this and I guess you could say its a good way to start things off since summer is nearly here
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