Craig Fox - Self made characters audio demo! FEEDBACK PLEASE

[CraigFox]

Alright, after taking in the critisism on my last demo I've tried to take the advice and thus come up with my new demo - please let me know what you think:

YouTube- Craig Fox - audio demo self made characters

Thanks

[ElliottSkywalker]

This is better. But I'm still not feeling the energy. I'm hearing your wide range and all, but the emotion and energy is still lacking. I'm not hearing your entire voice and all that you can do. It sounds like you're trying to be quiet because people are sleeping next door. I know what that's like. If you are trying to be quiet, then you should wait until your parents/roomates/friends (whatever) are out so then you have an opportunity to record freely. Let it all out. I can hear you have potential, you're just not showing it really here. Give it all you got!

[CraigFox]

This is better. But I'm still not feeling the energy. I'm hearing your wide range and all, but the emotion and energy is still lacking. I'm not hearing your entire voice and all that you can do. It sounds like you're trying to be quiet because people are sleeping next door. I know what that's like. If you are trying to be quiet, then you should wait until your parents/roomates/friends (whatever) are out so then you have an opportunity to record freely. Let it all out. I can hear you have potential, you're just not showing it really here. Give it all you got!

I gotta say that I thought the energy was pretty decent in their and the emotion was respectively believable, that's one of the major things I worked on - but I guess if you still feel that way then I'll look into it further...

Which brings me onto my next thing. Yes I am trying to be slightly quiet because frankly my neighbors are probably starting to think I am a weirdo doing strange voices lol, but this time I did let it out, but probably could have done more-so.

P.S

I just got a new mic, what do you think of the quality?

[ElliottSkywalker]

I gotta say that I thought the energy was pretty decent in their and the emotion was respectively believable, that's one of the major things I worked on - but I guess if you still feel that way then I'll look into it further...

Which brings me onto my next thing. Yes I am trying to be slightly quiet because frankly my neighbors are probably starting to think I am a weirdo doing strange voices lol, but this time I did let it out, but probably could have done more-so.

P.S

I just got a new mic, what do you think of the quality?


Let them think you're weird, because one day they're going see that you're a star and all that weirdness stuff really paid off.