baugusbryson's 2nd 2010 demo reel (A BETTER ONE!) would LOOOOOOOOVE feedback

[Bryson Baugus]

Hey! this is only my second demo reel and I'd really appreciate some feedback!!! :D

here: http://www.box.net/shared/9cbjrkyoj6

or here! YouTube- baugusbryson's 2010 2nd Demo Reel

again, would reaaallllly like feedback :3

[LunarArtemis]

Well, that was great :)

Voices that stood out to me:
The creepy scary ones, I think there were two...I got chills lol great job ;-)

The line that you were saying "if you've done anything to harm her" or something like that, well....LOVED it. delivery, voice and everything.

GRANDPA....grandpa grandpa grandpa...haha GAME GIRL-i just do know :D The conversation is familiar :-P I told you to get a cell phone Grandpa ;-)
Lol Love that voice for you ;-) But I think you could add more to it rather than relying on the "hearing problem" to add character to your voice, you could add different things to it. A cough, a wheeze, a little hesitation, maybe even a repitition in the line itself...little things like that ;-)

You're "zero" voice was nearly on target lol I could tell which one you meant it to be, but my heart didn't jump ;-) haha

This is a great reel and it really showcases your talent! (Btw, your "crying" in this reel is a lot better than what you did in SI. You're improving :D)

*applause* :hug

[Subaru-camui]

really good :) i guess the only thing i have is that the volume is hard to hear in some parts. You've improved, ^w^b good job :D

[Bryson Baugus]

really good :) i guess the only thing i have is that the volume is hard to hear in some parts. You've improved, ^w^b good job :D


Well, that was great :)

Voices that stood out to me:
The creepy scary ones, I think there were two...I got chills lol great job ;-)

The line that you were saying "if you've done anything to harm her" or something like that, well....LOVED it. delivery, voice and everything.

GRANDPA....grandpa grandpa grandpa...haha GAME GIRL-i just do know :D The conversation is familiar :-P I told you to get a cell phone Grandpa ;-)
Lol Love that voice for you ;-) But I think you could add more to it rather than relying on the "hearing problem" to add character to your voice, you could add different things to it. A cough, a wheeze, a little hesitation, maybe even a repitition in the line itself...little things like that ;-)

You're "zero" voice was nearly on target lol I could tell which one you meant it to be, but my heart didn't jump ;-) haha

This is a great reel and it really showcases your talent! (Btw, your "crying" in this reel is a lot better than what you did in SI. You're improving :D)

*applause* :hug


glad you both like it!! :D and I'll take your advice next time when I do that old man voice lunar ;p

[SolidJohtoPhoenix]

Really cool! :) The first part where you were like "Are you ready?" sounded a lot like Vic Mignogna's Edward Elric. I liked it a lot!

[Bryson Baugus]

Really cool! :) The first part where you were like "Are you ready?" sounded a lot like Vic Mignogna's Edward Elric. I liked it a lot!

wow! thanks for the feedback! glad you liked it! :D honestly I don't think I sound anywhere near Vic Mignogna, I've always thought of my voice being more like Greg Ayres lol but anyway, REALLY glad you liked it :3

[hyperknees91]

Hmm you know not a bad demo reel at all.

I think the one that was best delivered was the 2nd to last with irritated character, nice energy and the voice was great for the character~

However as for other lines, I felt like they just lacked character and power to really impact the listener. The acting itself wasn't bad don't get me wrong, but I felt like several of your characters chosen were too stereotypical (such as the oldman) or one dimensional. Also the monotoned voice in the latter half would've been better left out as it didn't really seem to add to your demo in any way.

Still overall I think your acting was pretty good, I would just try and be a bit more creative with your next demo reel, make some really interesting characters that will really capture the attention of the listener in a second if you know what I mean.

[Bryson Baugus]

Hmm you know not a bad demo reel at all.

I think the one that was best delivered was the 2nd to last with irritated character, nice energy and the voice was great for the character~

However as for other lines, I felt like they just lacked character and power to really impact the listener. The acting itself wasn't bad don't get me wrong, but I felt like several of your characters chosen were too stereotypical (such as the oldman) or one dimensional. Also the monotoned voice in the latter half would've been better left out as it didn't really seem to add to your demo in any way.

Still overall I think your acting was pretty good, I would just try and be a bit more creative with your next demo reel, make some really interesting characters that will really capture the attention of the listener in a second if you know what I mean.

ok, I'll keep that in mind next time :] thanks for commenting

[Gonax]

This demo suck pickles
due to the lack of sucky-ness

why can't my demo be this
awesome


because of this
this demo suck
grass

[Bryson Baugus]

Vic Mignogna says: "It sounded pretty good. My only suggestion is to keep it short, and make sure you put your strongest character voices on there first. Also, only put voices on there that you can maintain for a long period of recording. Dont put voices on your demo that would rip your voice up if you did them for more than an hour or so.

I wish you the best of success in your goals!"

=3

[LolitaRei]

I think Alison alone can give you 12948329573856 pages of feedback.