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CraigFox
03-01-2010, 05:58 PM
please see new demo here (http://voiceactingalliance.com/board/showthread.php?p=914506)
Steven Mane
03-01-2010, 06:03 PM
http://voiceactingalliance.com/board/forumdisplay.php?f=14

Come on. You need to look harder.

Move request.

EDIT: I can't report this thread because it's not spam, advertising, or harassing anybody. So nobody point that out. :)
CraigFox
03-01-2010, 06:06 PM
http://voiceactingalliance.com/board/forumdisplay.php?f=14

Come on. You need to look harder.

Move request.


Yes its been a long day, sorry about that - hopefully it will get moved.
CraigFox
03-02-2010, 04:21 PM
So, feedback on the demo anyone?
ElliottSkywalker
03-02-2010, 06:48 PM
The voices were pretty good. It was lacking a lot of energy. It sounded like you were just reading lines from a page. The acting was pretty stale. It sounded like you were holding back on a lot of the lines. Voice acting is all about getting your voice out there. I had the same problem when I first started out. Some SFX and background music would be nice, that way it would make it more interesting. Quality is alright, but I won't go into detail since you said not to say anything, so I'll just end it there. Pretty decent for a first demo reel, though. Keep it up!

Also, I don't want to be a hypocrite because I did almost the same thing in my demo reel. But like someone told me, it's better to come up with your own voices rather than do impressions. Producers are look for more unique voices. Why would they pick you, if they already have a voice for Peter Griffin? (just an example). Know what I mean? lol.
CraigFox
03-02-2010, 09:24 PM
I've updated it with music.

P.S

With regards to the character thing, yeah I understand, but I just wanted to show that my voice can be dynamic and I can follow direction, furthermore, I have done accents which I've intereperated in my own way so that's something.
LewyUK
03-02-2010, 10:07 PM
Not bad, but you have a long way to go in terms of emotion and enthusiam in your acting.

You did some of the accents well, but others you lacked in, but I suppose that's to be expected if you're new to Voice Acting.

Keep practicing, you'll get better in time!
CraigFox
03-03-2010, 08:30 AM
It sounds better with music though?
CraigFox
03-07-2010, 08:18 PM
bumper cars!
ElliottSkywalker
03-07-2010, 08:42 PM
The music does add a few touches to it, but the voices are still lacking feeling. Try to put yourself in the character's shoes. Music won't improve the voices, only you can do that yourself. Don't hold back, just let it all out. Let it flow through you.
CraigFox
03-07-2010, 09:25 PM
The music does add a few touches to it, but the voices are still lacking feeling. Try to put yourself in the character's shoes. Music won't improve the voices, only you can do that yourself. Don't hold back, just let it all out. Let it flow through you.

It will because I haven't changed any of the voices yet :razz: I just added music - but emotion is the #1 thing to work on next time I do an audio demo.