ElliottSkywalker's Multiple Demo Reels.

[ElliottSkywalker]

Elliott•Skywalker


Demo Reels

I combined all my demo reels into one thread. That way no one gets confused as to why there are so many threads relating to my demos. Anyway, hope you all enjoy. Since I do have a new mic as of now (GREAT quality), I might erase all these and put a new one up because the quality of these isn't so great. Bunch of peaking and all that. But in the meantime, these are up for listening. Thank you!

Demo 3 (more recent one) (http://www.box.net/shared/dk0quzmsj8)

Demo 2 (from long ago) (http://www.box.net/shared/poc0v8vgcg)

Demo 1 (first demo ever!) (http://www.box.net/shared/r9d0otojfr)


Music
Free Play Music
Star Wars OST

SFX
VAA SFX Library
Star Wars SFX

[Daglot Alta]

That Was Good, But Why Were All The Lines From The Original Star-wars Movies

[ElliottSkywalker]

I 'onno. I felt like taking the lines and adding my own touches to them. It's not all that bad, is it? Does it matter really, yes? :sweat

EDIT:: Not all the lines are from Stat Wars FIY.

[Daglot Alta]

No Their Not Bad I Was Just Wondering, And I Didn't Read Your Description At First, Sorry If I Made It Sound Like It Was Bad, I Was Just Wounding

[ElliottSkywalker]

Added an extra line at the end! Just a random UPDATE! :)

[ElliottSkywalker]

Ok final link I posted up. The former link had a skip in it when I said the intro. This time, it's all clean.

[LewyUK]

I dont care that they were Star Wars lines, they were great! Well done! :)

[ElliottSkywalker]

I dont care that they were Star Wars lines, they were great! Well done! :)

Thanks so much. I really appreciate the feedback! :razz:

[Daglot Alta]

This Was A Great Demo Reel, I Will Say This A Lot Of Your Voice's Sounded The Same To Me, But You Did Show A Lot Of Emotion, And That's A Good Thing, Now I Am Huge Starwars Fan, And I Say You Gave It Justice With All The Lines That Came From It, I Really Cant Say Anything Bad About It.


Daglot Alta......Approves

[CraigFox]

It was fairly decent (the sound/music mixing was good) but their is a certain lack of characteristics to your voice, and by that I mean whilst the accents and dialog are different they are still seldom hard to distinguish between characters as your voice still sounds the same in some places.

Nice effort though, good quality well done!

[ElliottSkywalker]

It was fairly decent (the sound/music mixing was good) but their is a certain lack of characteristics to your voice, and by that I mean whilst the accents and dialog are different they are still seldom hard to distinguish between characters as your voice still sounds the same in some places.

Nice effort though, good quality well done!

Thanks so much for the feedback. I'm actually in the process of making a new one (may not post on here because it's for professional purposes only). I completely know what you mean, though. As soon as I posted the demo reel, I listened to it again and I was like "Aw MAN! It all sounds the same!!" XD But I'll definitely take into account everything that has been said. Thank you very kindly!

[ElliottSkywalker]

BUMP! I added a new demo reel and took into account everyone anyone has ever said! Hope this one's better. This is my professional demo reel. I hope it meets everyone's standards! Please, please, PLEASE comment because I'm bringing this to an interview 2 Mondays from now. Also using it next Friday through Sunday. So I really need you guys's help on this one! Please and thank you!

[CraigFox]

That was a big improvement, from quality to characters good stuff! the characters and accents are a lot more dynamic and distinguishable and the mixing is good too. A pretty solid demo I would give you 8 out of 10 for that.

[Monotori]

Macbeth. Nice. :)

Oh, and I guess the rest was pretty good too.

[ElliottSkywalker]

Bumper thumper!

[ElliottSkywalker]

Yabba Dabba BUMP.

[ElliottSkywalker]

Alright so this IS my official demo. Just today I handed it in to the MTV crew to see what they have to say about it. I hope I get that ONE phone call about 65 other people have been waiting to get. :boom *is semi-nervous*

[ElliottSkywalker]

Before this goes STRAIGHT to the next page... BUMP! xD

[SonicTheVA]

This demo reel is really good overall. I will review each voice one by one.

1st Voice - The yelling was really spot on! You did very good with that line.

2nd Voice - Your little boy voice was good, but I think you should sound more boyish. I know sounding like a boy is a little tough, but I know you'll improve from what I've heard. :D

3rd Voice - That line was also spot on! Nice emotion you put in that line. I like how you sounded a lot worried.

4th Voice - That voice was really good. It sounds like an evil little girl but I think you should sound more "venomous" on that line if you were trying to portray an evil character.

5th Voice - I have to say that it was a very nice Southern accent you are putting there. But I think it needs more "oomph" in the accent but you still did great. Keep it up, y'all! xD

6th Voice - Nice seductive voice you are putting there. But I also feel that you should sound more seductive and most of all, "sexy", if you want to win some more guys. xD Keep it up. xD

7th Voice - From what I heard, that line was pretty good. like how you sounded more concerned on that line.

8th Voice - Now that is the line I really like. Your yelling was really spot-on. Nice feeling you put into that line!

9th Voice - It was spot on. I don't have anything to say about that.

10th Voice - I can tell you are trying to portray an evil character once again. Like I said to the other evil voice, it needs to sound more "venomous".

11th Voice - Like I said about your other little boy voice, I think you should sound more boyish. But it was a nice delivery on that line though.

Mixing - The mixing was spot-on! I don't have anything to say about that. :D

Overall - This was a really good demo reel to listen to. But I feel that you were holding back on some of your lines. You should never be afraid to put a lot more energy into them without being over-the-top. Great job! Keep it up! :D

[ElliottSkywalker]

This demo reel is really good overall. I will review each voice one by one.

1st Voice - The yelling was really spot on! You did very good with that line.

2nd Voice - Your little boy voice was good, but I think you should sound more boyish. I know sounding like a boy is a little tough, but I know you'll improve from what I've heard. :D

3rd Voice - That line was also spot on! Nice emotion you put in that line. I like how you sounded a lot worried.

4th Voice - That voice was really good. It sounds like an evil little girl but I think you should sound more "venomous" on that line if you were trying to portray an evil character.

5th Voice - I have to say that it was a very nice Southern accent you are putting there. But I think it needs more "oomph" in the accent but you still did great. Keep it up, y'all! xD

6th Voice - Nice seductive voice you are putting there. But I also feel that you should sound more seductive and most of all, "sexy", if you want to win some more guys. xD Keep it up. xD

7th Voice - From what I heard, that line was pretty good. like how you sounded more concerned on that line.

8th Voice - Now that is the line I really like. Your yelling was really spot-on. Nice feeling you put into that line!

9th Voice - It was spot on. I don't have anything to say about that.

10th Voice - I can tell you are trying to portray an evil character once again. Like I said to the other evil voice, it needs to sound more "venomous".

11th Voice - Like I said about your other little boy voice, I think you should sound more boyish. But it was a nice delivery on that line though.

Mixing - The mixing was spot-on! I don't have anything to say about that. :D

Overall - This was a really good demo reel to listen to. But I feel that you were holding back on some of your lines. You should never be afraid to put a lot more energy into them without being over-the-top. Great job! Keep it up! :D

O.O Wow. I forgot to reply to this! Anyway, thanks so much for taking the time to give a constructive criticism. Yeah. The boy voices I used to be able to do almost perfectly. Then I never practiced that much. THEN my natural voice became higher for some reason. And now I'm stuck with like a 14 year olds voice! Funny how that adds up. xD My natural voice used to be kinda low. Like near the Mid-low stance. NOW, it's at least high to mid-high. GAH! Never knew that could happen! http://planetsmilies.net/confused-smiley-17432.gif

[William_Fox]

I'd have to disagree with Mr. Craig Fox, although a little pedantic you do it justice by the captured emotion that you've done.

[ElliottSkywalker]

I'd have to disagree with Mr. Craig Fox, although a little pedantic you do it justice by the captured emotion that you've done.

Wait... is that a good thing. *has trouble with big words like pedantic* xD

[ElliottSkywalker]

Bump. I took the liberty to combine all my previous demo reels from the past into one thread. I thought that would make it easier for everyone to listen to. Enjoy!