Arararagi [ 1st ] Demo Reel 2010

[Arararagi]

ARARARAGI DEMO REEL 2010

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BGM: Atelier Rorona OST . Ar tonelico II OST . Ar tonelico III OST



SFX: Free Sound



Duration: 1:52



Mixing: Arararagi

Hey ho first demo reel /o/! First of all, I am sorry for the more longer duration of the reel, it was mostly used up by the intro and ending BGM and a few additional prolonged SFX. Comment and critiques are very much welcome, so and so because I want to get at least some input on this -- it would be really appreciated o3o!

[hyperknees91]

Hey I like music from ar tonelico as much as anyone, but for the intro all thats really necessary is to say your name and then proceed with the demo reel.

As for the demo reel itself it really didn't feel like you experimented with your range because every voice sounded the same. Just try and get a bit outside of your normal voice (add gruffness,raspyness make yourself sound older/younger and what not) so theres more variety here.

As far as the acting the easy-going characters were decent, but as for the others I didn't believe a word from them. It sounded like you were rushing their character a bit much rather really showing their emotion genuinely so take a bit more time as for emotions such as crying are not easily conveyed quickly.

So yeah trim out the intro and outro, experiment with more voice types, and practice delivery a bit more. Also you have a bit of an accent so try and see if you can polish that out as well.

[Arararagi]

Hey I like music from ar tonelico as much as anyone, but for the intro all thats really necessary is to say your name and then proceed with the demo reel.

As for the demo reel itself it really didn't feel like you experimented with your range because every voice sounded the same. Just try and get a bit outside of your normal voice (add gruffness,raspyness make yourself sound older/younger and what not) so theres more variety here.

As far as the acting the easy-going characters were decent, but as for the others I didn't believe a word from them. It sounded like you were rushing their character a bit much rather really showing their emotion genuinely so take a bit more time as for emotions such as crying are not easily conveyed quickly.

So yeah trim out the intro and outro, experiment with more voice types, and practice delivery a bit more. Also you have a bit of an accent so try and see if you can polish that out as well.I've been waiting for thissss, thanks for the crit hyperknees!

I'm gonna have to agree with you on shaving out the intro since after listening to it again it really was quite long and I could have actually put more voices by around twenty seconds of length.

And, really, I'm glad that you pointed out that I have an accent (even if it was just a bit of it) because I have no idea I had one lmao, so yep yep I'm trying to polish that out right now. You were also right that I should've experimented more with my range, turns out that I can do a few more ranges of voice after playing around a bit.

Anyway, thank you again for the crit, it's been really helpful /m\!