View Full Version : Steven Kelly (Sarifus) feb 2010
02-24-2010, 04:20 PM
I've been planning to make one of these for some time, but I only got to working on it as of about two days ago. Anyway, I'd love to get some feedback on this!
All dialogue/voices/music compositions and mixing by me.
YouTube- Demo reel feb 2010
Download page: http://stevenkellyvoice.webs.com/
02-24-2010, 06:26 PM
Nice work here man. A solid demo I believe. All the voices portrayed were done really well and were very believable. Can't nitpick at anything here..."CHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESEEEE!"
02-24-2010, 06:46 PM
Will edit this post when I get home and have a chance to listen to your awesome voice!
Okay, so I thought this demo was pretty cool. All the voices were very unique, but there wasn't much range to it. If capable, you could have done a few voices that were kind of in the medium range (or anything ridiculously high or somewhere in the high ranger). Definitely love your lower-ranged voices, you're a freakin' beast.
Another thing I would have liked to have heard were more emotions that stood out (ex: rage, sadness, madness, etc). You know, overly emotional voices.
Other than that, I thought this was a pretty neat demo. :)
02-24-2010, 07:33 PM
Hey already told you this but I really like your warm voice in this as it was very natural, genuine and overall the most heartfelt to me.
The other voices were great as well, I guess if you can work yourself into a younger/higher range of voices it would be awesome but not necessary. Good job man and a solid demo.
02-25-2010, 10:44 AM
Thanks for the critiques!
Hmm. Do you guys think it would be acceptable for me to just add an emotional high-voiced scene to this (as it's only 1:08 or something as it is), or do you reckon the reel in general needs a little rearrangement? From my perspective I've only done two 'low' voices in this, as the others were either my natural pitch or higher, but I realise that range is relative. Should I cut down on the amount of lowish voices in it?
02-25-2010, 07:57 PM
See its mainly all your voices sound like older people if you ask me, even if you did some higher than others the change wasn't drastic enough.
You've done higher voices in calls so I know you can do them, and I really think you should try and throw those in there.
03-02-2010, 04:15 PM
That was a nice solid demo, good stuff.
03-03-2010, 02:38 AM
Wow. You never cease to amaze me with your range. I've only heard you a few times and I must say, your range is incredibly impressive. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your lower ranges sounded more natural and smexy. The sound quality was amazing and almost professional sounding. Keep up the awesome work! I'd like to see you in more stuff! :razz:
Overall, I loved it.
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