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Bree
02-04-2010, 03:10 AM
BREE's FEBRUARY 2010 DEMO REEL.
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[[CLICK HERE]] (http://www.box.net/shared/xc4o7x6us1)
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SFX: Free Sound Project
BGM: Tokyo Mew Mew OST, Legend of Zelda OST, Katekyo Hitman Reborn! OST, TMOHS OST, Soul Eater OST, Lucky Star OST, Keroro Gunsou/SGT. FROG OST

Comment and Critiques make for a happy Bree! I want to improve, so throw your worst at me PLEASE. I'm aware that one line lacks quality compared to the rest...Yeah...stupidluckystarlinesteal. Speaking of steal, a good bit of these were quotes from things I adored. A lot. And then thers random things I made up n_n
<3

Damaru
02-04-2010, 03:17 AM
This thread is full of naked Battler being jerked around... XD

It's a bit hard to hear, but you have a very cute tone. :3 I also really like your boy voices! Maybe work on your womanly voices because they seem a little forced, but other than that this demo is pretty good!

BloodRedOath
02-04-2010, 03:17 AM
Like I told you before, even though this is a tad long, it kept my attention all the way through, so that's probably a good thing xD I really love that one yell when you're doing your black star and he falls btw lol. I think the performance was well done throughout the whole demo, just that last line, with the "air" and the echo I think you could work on a bit, but we'll work on that together xD Overall, good job, very versatile and fun voice, not like I didn't know that already, but this shows it off well ^^

(Yes I did just give you an ACTUAL critique <3)

Gonax
02-04-2010, 03:25 AM
ehhh it was ight lol
you already i know what I think

SonicTheVA
02-04-2010, 03:31 AM
I really like this demo reel overall (especially your little girl and boy voice). I would give critiques but others already said what I was going to say and I don't want to repeat things that someone already said. Keep it up!

Bree
02-04-2010, 11:03 AM
This thread is full of naked Battler being jerked around... XD

It's a bit hard to hear, but you have a very cute tone. :3 I also really like your boy voices! Maybe work on your womanly voices because they seem a little forced, but other than that this demo is pretty good!

Yes. Yes it is. But I took it out of my sig, since it took away from Lambo and Tamama's cuteness. He's still here though. Silly Battler.

Strange that it's hard to hear, it comes out a bit TOO loud for me...then again I do wear headphones at a rather high level...>>
Yay little boy voices!
And yeah...'bout those womanly voices. HAAA. FUNNNY JOKE.
But really, yeah I should work on those. I never really have tried to...but they definitely are my weakest link here. Thanks for the comment <3


Like I told you before, even though this is a tad long, it kept my attention all the way through, so that's probably a good thing xD I really love that one yell when you're doing your black star and he falls btw lol. I think the performance was well done throughout the whole demo, just that last line, with the "air" and the echo I think you could work on a bit, but we'll work on that together xD Overall, good job, very versatile and fun voice, not like I didn't know that already, but this shows it off well ^^

(Yes I did just give you an ACTUAL critique <3)

Of course it kept your attention, commmmeon it's meeeee XD I didn't like that Blackstar one at first but I kinda really do now. And I'm well aware of the last line, I think this is the 80th time you said that. SO DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT AND HELP MEEEEEEEEEEE >:
xD Yay happy fun range and voices and fun tiemz!

....wait.....

NU WHY DID YOU GIMME A CRITIQUE NAO I NEED TO GO WRITE ONE FOR YOU INSTEAD OF CREEPY THINGS I WANNA DO TO YOU >:
okay.
fine. D;
<3


ehhh it was ight lol
you already i know what I think

Yeah. I know >: Just ight.
It's just terrible.
I'm such a bad person >;;;;;;;
teachmeplz?


I really like this demo reel overall (especially your little girl and boy voice). I would give critiques but others already said what I was going to say and I don't want to repeat things that someone already said. Keep it up!
Hehe thanks! I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the comment <3



-Bree

hyperknees91
02-04-2010, 05:09 PM
Alrighty lets have a look at this.

First of all you have alot of energy and most of your characters have alot of character to them. Also being to overexaggerate your emotions so naturally without it being forced was a treat to listen to.

However I think you put far too many overexaggerate/comical characters in here, I think people can get the gist after 3 of those voices that you can play that type of character but here it was pretty much your whole demo reel. The few times you tried to use more serious characters it came off as very forced and unbelievable (though your crying voice was ok, just keep working on that).

Remember in a demo reel you want to try to show off a wide variety of characters in different situations, also I would work on expanding your range a little more as nearly all of your voices were high and in the same age range. Though it should be noted your little boy was good and I also enjoyed your take on him~

It's a fun demo reel no doubt, but in the future show people you can do a little more.

McTricky
02-04-2010, 11:46 PM
Hey this was quite a decent demo reel!

~ You seem to be good at these high-cutsy voices, as well as the mid-high tones as well.
~ You already know that I love the energy you always put into your roles. This was no exception.
~ I think a couple of those low-toned characters sounded forced. You seemed a little uncomfortable with them, so I suggest you work on them a little more.
~ Like, Hyperknees said, a lot of the voices were the same type. Cute, comical, exaggerated. Since you do want to voice act in a variety of things, try to show that through a variety of lines and emotions.
~ The demo was a little too long, but I won't hold that against you. It's not as if it was 2mins long.

Overall, a decent demo here! Also, extra points for the manbitch Battler.

Takeshi19
02-04-2010, 11:54 PM
Bree, you always impress me as Tsuna, your voice is epic~ And zomg, you put that X-Burner Air at the end, it sent me shivers. Whew~

I don't really see anything negative in that demo reel. So, it was pretty good, I guess all that's left is expanding more in the vocal range. :D.

Anyway, keep up the good work. *Thumbs up*

Bree
02-07-2010, 12:29 AM
Alrighty lets have a look at this.

First of all you have alot of energy and most of your characters have alot of character to them. Also being to overexaggerate your emotions so naturally without it being forced was a treat to listen to.

However I think you put far too many overexaggerate/comical characters in here, I think people can get the gist after 3 of those voices that you can play that type of character but here it was pretty much your whole demo reel. The few times you tried to use more serious characters it came off as very forced and unbelievable (though your crying voice was ok, just keep working on that).

Remember in a demo reel you want to try to show off a wide variety of characters in different situations, also I would work on expanding your range a little more as nearly all of your voices were high and in the same age range. Though it should be noted your little boy was good and I also enjoyed your take on him~

It's a fun demo reel no doubt, but in the future show people you can do a little more.

Yeah, I didn't want people to be bored, so I did a lot of what I considered 'interest catching'. I'm still working on a womanly/mature voice, and the crying line I was a bit disappointed with, but I didn't really want to re recorded it because my family was all here >< I plan to add more Angry, Scared, Passionate...etc emotion-lines in my next demo, which I plan to do in a few months. I did this one fairly quickly XD I'll remember to demonstrate a greater range, I tried to show of my boyish voices more in this, since my last demo was really just girl voices that were way too similar.
Thanks for your critique <3


Hey this was quite a decent demo reel!

~ You seem to be good at these high-cutsy voices, as well as the mid-high tones as well.
~ You already know that I love the energy you always put into your roles. This was no exception.
~ I think a couple of those low-toned characters sounded forced. You seemed a little uncomfortable with them, so I suggest you work on them a little more.
~ Like, Hyperknees said, a lot of the voices were the same type. Cute, comical, exaggerated. Since you do want to voice act in a variety of things, try to show that through a variety of lines and emotions.
~ The demo was a little too long, but I won't hold that against you. It's not as if it was 2mins long.

Overall, a decent demo here! Also, extra points for the manbitch Battler.

Yay, I'm glad my energy and my high/mid range entertained you! I'll be sure to show more of a variety next time, I tried to focus a lot on my boy voices this time around, since I feel like those are what I'm stronger at. I'll be sure to work on my mature/lower range more, and show more of an emotional range next time.

And of course, Manbitch Battler is amazing <3

Thanks for your inputtt <3



Bree, you always impress me as Tsuna, your voice is epic~ And zomg, you put that X-Burner Air at the end, it sent me shivers. Whew~

I don't really see anything negative in that demo reel. So, it was pretty good, I guess all that's left is expanding more in the vocal range. :D.

Anyway, keep up the good work. *Thumbs up*

Yay! Tsuna! I'm so happy you like my Tsuna <3 It makes me so happy! Yay shivers! I thought that was a strong way to end n_n

I'll be sure to expand my range a bit more, thanks so much for you comments <3


-Bree

Kinkajou
02-07-2010, 11:24 AM
You're really a voice actor I look up too, Seriously ~~
Your boy voice is so great! I'm really lucky to be working with you on the digimon fandub.

Can't wait for your next Demo Reel.

Bree
02-09-2010, 01:46 PM
You're really a voice actor I look up too, Seriously ~~
Your boy voice is so great! I'm really lucky to be working with you on the digimon fandub.

Can't wait for your next Demo Reel.

Aw <3 Thank you so much!
I'm excited to work wiff yew too n_n

-Bree

Bree
02-12-2010, 03:31 PM
Bump~ n_n

-Bree

Zekkai
02-13-2010, 08:08 PM
As many have been saying, this demo reel was very well put together! You have a nice range as well as show great emotion, so very nice job!

Bree
02-16-2010, 09:12 PM
As many have been saying, this demo reel was very well put together! You have a nice range as well as show great emotion, so very nice job!

Thank you very much n_n

-Bree

Eretoffer
02-17-2010, 03:23 AM
Cool ^^. I really like this!

Bree
02-18-2010, 04:50 AM
Cool ^^. I really like this!
Thanks =D

-Bree

sparf
02-18-2010, 04:57 AM
First off, loving your kid voices. They sound energetic and full of life!

"These toys are far too much for you" - It sound s like you're trying to use your chest resonator, but you're forcing the sound down into an octave it doesn't want to be in.

"I'll surpass the sky. Alright, let's do this!" - This one sounds much better. You aren't forcing. It sounds very nice and absolutely believable. I want to know who this is and what they're about to do.

A couple of times your music overpowers your vocals a little. Just a minor technical note for the future.

The sobbing line near the end, I believed. You made me a little sad with it. ^_^

your last line, like the 'toys' line above, feels forced down into a register it doesn't want to be in.

Great work!I would say, technically, that you could cut down the length of this demo into around a minute by trimming out some of the voices. You do kids really well but by halfway in, we know that quite well. We don't need to keep hearing them to believe in your awesome power of kid-dom. So you could trim some of your less favorites out as well as cutting or replacing the two forced-sounding adults and then voila! Awesomeness ensues!

Great work overall though! Seriously!

Bree
02-23-2010, 12:03 AM
First off, loving your kid voices. They sound energetic and full of life!

"These toys are far too much for you" - It sound s like you're trying to use your chest resonator, but you're forcing the sound down into an octave it doesn't want to be in.

"I'll surpass the sky. Alright, let's do this!" - This one sounds much better. You aren't forcing. It sounds very nice and absolutely believable. I want to know who this is and what they're about to do.

A couple of times your music overpowers your vocals a little. Just a minor technical note for the future.

The sobbing line near the end, I believed. You made me a little sad with it. ^_^

your last line, like the 'toys' line above, feels forced down into a register it doesn't want to be in.

Great work!I would say, technically, that you could cut down the length of this demo into around a minute by trimming out some of the voices. You do kids really well but by halfway in, we know that quite well. We don't need to keep hearing them to believe in your awesome power of kid-dom. So you could trim some of your less favorites out as well as cutting or replacing the two forced-sounding adults and then voila! Awesomeness ensues!

Great work overall though! Seriously!

Thanks for the comment! I'll work on cutting it down, cutting on some of my kid voices, and working on my lower range. Some lines I added for emotion, and not really voice type, I guess those added up though ^^' And the last line is Tsuna from Katekyo Hitman Reborn!, I think it's just me not being able to somewhat yell in a boy tone, since It isn't uncomfortable, I just have some trouble still expressing properly in it, I think. ^^' Glad you liked it though!


-Bree

Bree
03-30-2010, 03:02 AM
Thought I would give this a bump, I might make a new demo sometime next month~

-Bree

Genshie
03-30-2010, 03:11 AM
I enjoyed it! Nicely done. I don't believe I have said this but love your siggy, LOVE IT!

I can easily say that you got kid voices done to the letter, even young male teens. I would like to hear you use more mature voices, since for the most part alot of these perticular characters/voices are pretty young.

Bree
05-12-2010, 08:12 PM
I'm thinking of, when I get my mic issue all better, making a new demo. So some more critiques would be fantastic~

-Bree

tomatocars
05-13-2010, 08:59 AM
I'm not gonna lie, I didn't pay attention the first time around because I was too preoccupied looking at your signature and that umineko pic. XDDD

I'll have to take a good listen to this tomorrow when I'm awake @_@

Bree
05-13-2010, 11:09 AM
I'm not gonna lie, I didn't pay attention the first time around because I was too preoccupied looking at your signature and that umineko pic. XDDD

I'll have to take a good listen to this tomorrow when I'm awake @_@

Too distracting? XDDDD I apologize.

-Bree

Bree
05-31-2010, 05:25 PM
Bumpin' this again~ Comments & Critiques are nice =3

-Bree

Bree
07-06-2010, 08:18 PM
Bumpbumpingbump =DD

-Bree

CaptnAwesomee
07-06-2010, 09:05 PM
good stuff bree,

p.s nice job on the portal Project too : D

CrossFire
07-06-2010, 09:06 PM
You did really well and you're voice is really cute. I also noticed you had a wide range of voices.

~Your high cute voices were nice and smooth.
~On the "You're late. Penality!" It sounded a bit rushed and it sounded like you were just kind of reading the line. Maybe its just me...I don't know.
~On some of the lower voices they sound a bit pushed but not too pushed.
~I adored your Tsuna voice I found it mega cute c:

Overall, your demo reel was awesome. Keep up the good work c:

CaptnAwesomee
07-06-2010, 09:08 PM
lol I love ur Black star Blahaha