KiTSUyasha's First Demo Reel 2010!~

[KiTSUyasha]

Well this is the first time I've ever done a demo reel since I am still quite the new kid on the block~ Not all the characters I've worked on are in here but the ones I am most confident about. (Females/Males) So I'll probably be making another one somewhere down the road as I get better. Critiques are GREATLY and HIGHLY (and other words ending in -ly) appreciated, especially since I'm working hard to widen my range~ (males mostly)

Oh and before I forget I have 2 scenes where I am the same person, because I couldn't for the life of me choose which line I liked the most~


http://www.box.net/shared/qu4v3517t0 (edit: I had to change the link because it wasn't coming up as an mp3)

[KiTSUyasha]

ok had to change the link so it could be playable, first time using that site so apologies all around~

[hyperknees91]

Now lets see here. I liked the range you have, but just try to experiment a little more in the future as some of the more softer ones sounded quite similar to one another.

As for the acting I believe the 2nd voice and the "clueless one" were the best as they seemed much more natural than the others. As for the others they felt kinda scripted and I felt like you paced yourself too slow. The vocal projection wasn't bad but just try to put more energy and character into them, as they were a bit unbelievable for the most part.

As for the attack move you put in here, I liked the energy you decided to put in but it also seemed too held back so it came out flat overall. Still not a bad attempt.

Basically just experiment with delivery a little more, get a little more in character and think of how you can add more life to your lines. Also watch out for slurring ^^

[KiTSUyasha]

Now lets see here. I liked the range you have, but just try to experiment a little more in the future as some of the more softer ones sounded quite similar to one another.

As for the acting I believe the 2nd voice and the "clueless one" were the best as they seemed much more natural than the others. As for the others they felt kinda scripted and I felt like you paced yourself too slow. The vocal projection wasn't bad but just try to put more energy and character into them, as they were a bit unbelievable for the most part.

As for the attack move you put in here, I liked the energy you decided to put in but it also seemed too held back so it came out flat overall. Still not a bad attempt.

Basically just experiment with delivery a little more, get a little more in character and think of how you can add more life to your lines. Also watch out for slurring ^^

That's funny since the clueless one is closest to my natural voice while the 2nd voice was the hardest to achieve because her range is soooo high to me >< (Hanako from Disgaea 2) I'm surprised you didn't think she sounded forced. And yes I have a bad habit of trying to focus on keeping a lower tone instead of the realism in the words and pace. And the attack....xD Well I appreciate the fact that it was decent, that was one of the first characters I ever tried and she almost didn't make it in here. Thanks so much for giving detailed critique I can work on~