I'm Taking You To Paradise - Paradise Kiss Clip

[Cydonia]

"I'm Taking You to Paradise.."
Paradise Kiss Episode 1 Teaser Clip


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YouTube- Paradise Kiss Episode 1 Clip Fandub


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Cast


(In order of appearance)


George - MattAlan
Yukari - Cydonia


SFX


Original clip, Ljudo and Sounddogs. <3


BGM


Paradise Kiss OST. <3


Tools


Sony Vegas 9.0
Audacity
Adobe Audition


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Comments


I understand that my performance wasn't brilliant, but that was the whole idea and point of doing this clip. I would love critiques on how to make my Yukari voice actually work. I probably sound too soft and innocent, and I need to make my voice more strong and sharp, so I'll work on that. But if anyone has any advice for me, I would LOVE to hear it! :3
But please do take into account that this clip was made within.. An hour or so, and it was my first time mixing too. I'm very ill at the moment so I sound a bit nasally too. So apologies for that!
But MattAlan sounds as flawless as ever. <3


I hope you enjoy!

[crystal]

I just finished watching the anime about two weeks ago. Loves this <3

Here are my thoughts for what they are worth:

Mixing: Not bad for your first time! What I loved the most was that all of the audio sounded very clear. There was nothing muddy about it or the video, so it was a lot more enjoyable to watch. Levels were also good.

To be more constructive, I would like to hear more sfx in the future. There weren't that many and do they do so much to help pull the audience into the scene. You've probably heard this before, but try checking the sfx library here and also soundsnap. There are some good quality effects floating around that would really help polish this clip.

Great job overall!

Yukari/Cydonia: I atually like your tone for Yukari. It kinda has a smooth quality to it that makes your voice really easy to listen to, and I thought the "apathetic, slightly innocent" air you put on worked really well in the earlier part of the clip. I felt you were holding back on where Yukari's yelling at George. I know when you are first starting out that it can be a bit intimidating to do yelling/screaming lines, especially when you're living with siblings/the 'rents/roomies, but don't be afraid to put your all into every single line. Yukari swings from being a passionate diva to a whimpering crybaby within the blink of an eye, and that's the aspect of her personality that I would like to see brought out a bit more. I have complete faith in you, and I know this will only get better and better. Looking forward to hearing more of your lovely Yukari. =)

George/Matt: I have to admit that when I first saw you were playing George, I wasn't the least bit surprised. =P This performance shows how much you truly know this character, inside and out. At first, I thought you might place his tone higher than I anticipated (I guess I was expecting your normal voice), but it was spot on, and I actually favor it over the official dub. It was very "arrogant-prince-charming" and very George. One of your best performances I would say. I really can't wait to hear more!

The board needs more ParaKiss, and I'm glad more people are doing projects from it. <3 Please post more soon! =D

[Cydonia]

I just finished watching the anime about two weeks ago. Loves this <3

Here are my thoughts for what they are worth:

Mixing: Not bad for your first time! What I loved the most was that all of the audio sounded very clear. There was nothing muddy about it or the video, so it was a lot more enjoyable to watch. Levels were also good.

To be more constructive, I would like to hear more sfx in the future. There weren't that many and do they do so much to help pull the audience into the scene. You've probably heard this before, but try checking the sfx library here and also soundsnap. There are some good quality effects floating around that would really help polish this clip.

Great job overall!

Yukari/Cydonia: I atually like your tone for Yukari. It kinda has a smooth quality to it that makes your voice really easy to listen to, and I thought the "apathetic, slightly innocent" air you put on worked really well in the earlier part of the clip. I felt you were holding back on where Yukari's yelling at George. I know when you are first starting out that it can be a bit intimidating to do yelling/screaming lines, especially when you're living with siblings/the 'rents/roomies, but don't be afraid to put your all into every single line. Yukari swings from being a passionate diva to a whimpering crybaby within the blink of an eye, and that's the aspect of her personality that I would like to see brought out a bit more. I have complete faith in you, and I know this will only get better and better. Looking forward to hearing more of your lovely Yukari. =)

George/Matt: I have to admit that when I first saw you were playing George, I wasn't the least bit surprised. =P This performance shows how much you truly know this character, inside and out. At first, I thought you might place his tone higher than I anticipated (I guess I was expecting your normal voice), but it was spot on, and I actually favor it over the official dub. It was very "arrogant-prince-charming" and very George. One of your best performances I would say. I really can't wait to hear more!

The board needs more ParaKiss, and I'm glad more people are doing projects from it. <3 Please post more soon! =D
Aw, thank you so much crystal! <3
This really means a lot to me! Thank you lots again! :3 Since this was only really a quick clip posing as a teaser, I obviously didn't really do this professionally because I wanted to get it done ASAP! X3 I'm glad you like my voice for Yukari! It's hard to choose the right voice for her because she has so many moodswings to go off haha! It gets pretty confusing! D:
I will most definitely take your advice into account, and I can't thank you enough for watching and actually giving me the critique I need! <3

[Matt Alan]

:) The full episode of this will be amazing! For those who haven't already, they should audition for a fun full episode dub that will be complete! I had alot of fun recording for this, and it was a pleasure to perform beside Miss Cydonia! so much fun!

[Damaru]

"I'm taking you to Paradise~."

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! *DIES* You can take me anywhere! XDD

This looks pretty good so far, I can't wait until this is cast and when the first episode comes out!