VinceEaton Character Demo Reel(Feedback Appreciated)

[VinceEaton]

I've been working on putting this together for a while now, but this is my first stab at an animation demo edited with sfx. I'm new to this forum and it would be great to start meeting some people here. Take a listen and let me know what you think. :)

http://www.4shared.com/file/189048054/cfcd5446/VinceEatonCharacterDemo.html

[codeblackhayate]

I really enjoyed your demo reel and the diferentiation of the characters, even when some of them were in the same range. It was really nicely done.

My only comments would be that you should try a little reordering and a few subjective things. The beginning clip didn't really hook me in, and I think that one of the others, like the young hero. Also, the evil scientist and the old man were a little over powered by the backgrounds. The scientist in particular didn't seem to be at the same volume as the other clips. I would have liked to hear the detail in both of those voices. The ending bomb was nicely done, but since the decay was so long, I was expecting to hear another clip after it.

[VinceEaton]

I really enjoyed your demo reel and the diferentiation of the characters, even when some of them were in the same range. It was really nicely done.

My only comments would be that you should try a little reordering and a few subjective things. The beginning clip didn't really hook me in, and I think that one of the others, like the young hero. Also, the evil scientist and the old man were a little over powered by the backgrounds. The scientist in particular didn't seem to be at the same volume as the other clips. I would have liked to hear the detail in both of those voices. The ending bomb was nicely done, but since the decay was so long, I was expecting to hear another clip after it.

Thanks for your feedback, codeblackhayate. I'm thinking of swapping the superhero/sidekick spot with the admissions officer selection. Editing was actually handled by another person, I like most of the work he did, but would have liked a little less production on the young hero (I imagined being in a great hall speaking with reverence, not in the middle of a battlefield).

I had another couple clips I had included, but they started going over length, and 1:10 is better than 1:30. There was a troll bemoaning his recent breakup that I really hoped to end things on, and I may see if I can get the raw files and go pop him back in with some sappy romantic music.