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Tali
03-09-2005, 09:01 PM
Yey another non-angsty poem from me. Please r+r.


Fairytales on Earth
Can you catch a moonbeam?
Use it to find gold?
Can you get some unicorn's sweat?
To keep away the cold?

Can you run to heaven's light?
Weave it into a coat?
Can you take a magic mountain?
And hide it in a boat?

Can you bring a fairytale
From child full of wonder?
Bring it to the earth to inspire mankinds' heart?
Or must you wait and hope and dream while sitting in the dark?

Cefaclor
03-11-2005, 07:31 PM
Nice job ;) Kinda reminds me of Pocahontas.
But regardless, Nice job ;)
Keep penning away...
:D

Tamashii
03-11-2005, 08:27 PM
Good job Tali! ^^ So cute!

TESM
03-12-2005, 11:44 PM
nice rythm and nice break from the pattern towards the end, it still fir well with the mind-set.

nice work.