My First F*ck*ng Demo Reel!!!!

[arkane]

This be mah demo reel

http://www.plunder.com/DR-mp3-download-3b6907a9d3.htm

This be mah Transcript of the Demo Reel [In case your having a hard time hearing it]

Me: Finally! After a f-ing long time! I finally have my own f-ing demo reel! Oh yeah introductions! Sorry about that! My name is Arkane and this is my demo reel. Most of my voice is edited so try to spot that isn't edited. Goodluck and Enjoy!

Leader Guy: Go, go, go, Move!

Leader Guy: Ok boys.. commlink says that were now inside enemy territory. We have to locate 4 power generators and sabotage it so that our main strike force can enter and--

Leader Guy: What in Christ's name was that?

Random Guy: Uhh.. I think someone farted Sir.

Leader Guy: F-ck.. They never paid me enough to do this job. Alright who was it?

Leader Guy: Michael! Arrgh! You really do have a sick mind, you know that?

Random Guy: Hey! I never fart in my battle suit you know!

Leader Guy: Well who was it then? Come on!

Random Guy: Ehh.. It wasn't me sir

Leader Guy: Oh for Christ's sake! Sigh! Never mind that. Let's just go on with the mission and finish it quickly. Come on Let's go.

Random Guy: Sure thing boss!

Leader Guy: Bryan! You Farted Didn't you?!

Random Guy: Eh.. Ehehe.. hehe..

Leader Guy: Damn you to hell Michael.. Damn you to Hell.

Disembodied Voice: Meanwhile.. At the Lair of the evil Arkanum.

Generic Evil Guy with Distorted Voice: All goes as planned.. LOL! Oh man! Ohmanohmanohman! This is the best episode of spongbob ever! I love this show! And it's so convenient, that everything that I want to watch is planned! This has got to be the Best Day Ever!

Leader Guy: This was supposed to be a stealth mission!

Random Guy: I knnow boss but it's fun! Haha!

Leader Guy: Where did I go wrong?

Random Guy: Uhh.. Boss! I need some help over here!

Leader Guy: STFU! You can fend them off by yourself!

Random Guy: OK! OK! Chill! Sheesh! Don't be a hothead!

Disembodied voice: To be continued.

Some Fast Talking Guy: Question Mark.

And my Outro with some tips on the microphone

[Kinkajou]

I knew your voice was edited but it was pretty good for a first Demo Reel.
Your voice really fits the boss-type and I think you would rock at the
Bad Guy!

You could have used some other voices though. I mean, I only heard low voices. You could try some accents. I think your voice could fit the Hero-type too, The Hero-type usually doesn't have a very low voice but not to high either. You could work on that for example.
Also, a Demo Reel is only about your voice, not about what microfoon you use. It was nice of you to tell us though.

So, To make a long story short, It's a good first Demo Reel.

[arkane]

I knew your voice was edited but it was pretty good for a first Demo Reel.
Your voice really fits the boss-type and I think you would rock at the
Bad Guy!

You could have used some other voices though. I mean, I only heard low voices. You could try some accents. I think your voice could fit the Hero-type too, The Hero-type usually doesn't have a very low voice but not to high either. You could work on that for example.
Also, a Demo Reel is only about your voice, not about what microfoon you use. It was nice of you to tell us though.

So, To make a long story short, It's a good first Demo Reel.

The thing about the microphone was supposed to be a joke.

[The Pawt]

...You know, as a reel to display your range and what voices you can do... This was actually kinda bad. Everything in this was in the low/medium-low register, and your emotion was kinda flat most of the time... but somehow... I still loved it. It had that silly "OH YEAH I'M SO AWESOME! YEEEEEAAAAAH!" feeling to it that made me smile all the way through it. The Evil Overlord/Demon voice with the over-the-top voice editting made me laugh more so than the rest, but sadly, after that, the quality of your voices really dropped, becoming more flat and sounding the same.

Oh, and before I forget it, your accent made me think of Metalocalypse and Dethklok ;D

But really now, for your next reel, display your ENTIRE range, not just what your best at. We who listen to it want to hear everything your voice can do, so that we can build up an image in our heads of what kinds of characters you could perform and how well you would be able to act in certain scenarios and so on. You should also work a bit more on the emotions, getting them better than they were in this reel. And cut out the final oart about your mic. It is not relevant to the reel and should therefor not be in it, even if it is a joke : P

...Aaaand another 15 bonus points for being awesome! ;D

[arkane]

...You know, as a reel to display your range and what voices you can do... This was actually kinda bad. Everything in this was in the low/medium-low register, and your emotion was kinda flat most of the time... but somehow... I still loved it. It had that silly "OH YEAH I'M SO AWESOME! YEEEEEAAAAAH!" feeling to it that made me smile all the way through it. The Evil Overlord/Demon voice with the over-the-top voice editting made me laugh more so than the rest, but sadly, after that, the quality of your voices really dropped, becoming more flat and sounding the same.

Oh, and before I forget it, your accent made me think of Metalocalypse and Dethklok ;D

But really now, for your next reel, display your ENTIRE range, not just what your best at. We who listen to it want to hear everything your voice can do, so that we can build up an image in our heads of what kinds of characters you could perform and how well you would be able to act in certain scenarios and so on. You should also work a bit more on the emotions, getting them better than they were in this reel. And cut out the final oart about your mic. It is not relevant to the reel and should therefor not be in it, even if it is a joke : P

...Aaaand another 15 bonus points for being awesome! ;D

FINALLY!!! SOMEONE THAT KNOWS HOW TO CRITIC!!!

You are hereby officialy AWESOME