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OMGawkwardTURTLE
12-10-2009, 05:12 AM
UPDATE 3/7/10
Hellos!
I've finally made my "real" first demo reel XD

I suppose I should leave the really icky rough demo I did for fun up here, but its really gross. I don't know why anyone would want to listen to it o.O Anyways I'm really excited to update this because although I put this off for a while, I finally finished it! I'm relatively new to voice acting, except for a couple of stuff I did as a tweenie, so any critiques/reviews would be VERY appreciated.

Real Version:
Click here please :P (http://www.4shared.com/file/235937440/b8b9deab/OMGawkwardTURTLE_Demo_Reel_201.html)

Icky Version:
click here please XD (http://www.4shared.com/file/169471973/d8fdfd96/1stroughofthefirstdemo.html)
OMGawkwardTURTLE
03-07-2010, 06:20 AM
Bumper cars?
ElliottSkywalker
03-07-2010, 09:22 AM
First off, LOVE the name!
Second, this was very good for a first demo reel! The quality of the audio was a little poor, though. Also at times it sounded like you were holding back a lot. The voices sounded similar. Work on broadening your range, also with emotion. At the beginning, it didn't sound like the first line caught my attention. You should (like most others) open the demo with a real attention grabber! Just a little improvement and you'll be good to go! :)
OMGawkwardTURTLE
03-08-2010, 06:05 AM
XD
I don't even remember how I cam up with this username :P Thank you for your critique! :] Honestly I actually have a pro tools studio microphone but its so intense I'm still figuring out how to use it o.o I understand about the voices though, a couple of days I lost my voice so I was/am recovering from that lol I just wanted something up quick :) Anyway, thank you so much again :D
Monotori
03-11-2010, 12:01 AM
While it was a decent reel, your level of excitement never went above indoor-voice. Some of the lines were very well-executed, but whether you need to be quiet while recording or you're just self-conscious, letitgo! Just yell at the mic during the angry parts! Wail at it! Serenade it! Half those lines people would probably not want to put in a production because, well, they're boring. Next time, I think you should choose some more exciting lines, add appropriate BGM (to give it a bit more flair), and be more excited about what you're saying. Just a small step and you're there; speak up! We wanna hear you!