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Stray
02-21-2005, 04:31 AM
Just a Strayer original, soon to be made into a song

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Driving on a rainy night
Looking for some kind of light
In the darkness

That's when I lose control of the car
And/But I tell myself it won't be far
To safety

I pray that this is not the end
Fate conspires and I contend,
I contend

'Cause heaven's not a place I'd like to be
If you were not next to me
Flashback. my life, you're all I see
Never forget me

Suddenly I feel very COLD
Light shines all around me
Could this be that Holy place?
I hear heavenly sounds
Then I remember what I'd leave behind
My life, my friends, something I'll never again find:
YOU

'Cause heaven's not a place I'd like to be
If you weren't here with me
And I'd give up having everything
Just so I could hold you again

I wake up in a hospital room
Doctor's come and nurses loom
They all ask me if I can speak
Outstretch my arm, Its you I seek

All I feel is your gentle touch on my hand
Makes me remember how we used to walk HAND in hand
I've realized that I was in heaven before
But, if I'm not with you,
I don't wanna be there anymore

Heaven's not a place I'd like to be
If you weren't here with me
I'll tell you I love you whenever I can
And I promise to never leave you again.

Nikki Wright
02-21-2005, 05:20 AM
Beautiful ;-;

h2ojournalist
02-21-2005, 11:06 AM
Very good!

Azure
02-21-2005, 06:30 PM
Ooh very nice stuff and quite unusual imagery ^^

Tali
03-09-2005, 10:35 AM
Oh this is really nice and a good idea. I can't wait to hear the song !

pyromaster
03-13-2005, 11:18 PM
hmm.. is this poem dedicated to anyone Stray? it's really lovely, and very emotional. I can tell you really put thought into that one. Very well done