pencil drawings of two j-rock vocalists

[aseriana]

Hey everyone X3 I haven't had the chance to get pictures of/scan any art from the past couple of months; however, from the past year these are two drawings that I've gotten gotten up on deviant art that I'm particularly proud of ^-^

First up! A drawing of Ryou, the vocalist of the now disbanded J-Rock band, baroque
http://www.deviantart.com/view/10854535/

And second! A drawing of Ryuutarou, the vocalist of the J-Rock band, Plastic Tree!
http://www.deviantart.com/view/10854637/

Well that's all I've got now! Both are just plain old pencil drawings. (pencil being my weapon of choice >3) I hope you guys enjoy them! ^-^

[Lenne]

The first one is great! I like the greenish tint to it, but was that a digital camera thing? Is it a copy or made up? If it's made up.. wwwoooww...

As for the second... that I'm guessing you made up. Well, for a real person the eyes are WWAAYYY too big. It doesn't look like you were trying to draw anime, so, ya, too big. The lips... same as the eyes... they're kinda too big. (Unless this guy has freakishly large lips? o_0...) And the nose needs some work also, try studying noses to see what they look lik.

But, still, good job and nice shading! I hope that came across as constructive crisiticm and not as being mean and evil, my friend said she doesn't like showing me her stuff 'cus I make her feel bad 'cus I say stuff. I couldn't believe that, I'm like "IT'S CONSTRUCTIVE CRISITCIM, I'M HELPING YOU!!" my other friend covered her ears, ^__^.

[Azure]

The top one is definatly your best! Really detailed well done ;3
I really am rubbish at people!

[vncntblackk]

Hello there, I was wondering if you had anything on the drawing board. Looking good so far, the highlight hairs, are these negatively drawn or are you indenting. I like the hairs within the shadows, adds more volume to the hair.