View Full Version : Ouranfan's Feb 2009 Character Reel
02-16-2009, 01:02 AM
This is one of my first character reels. I hope you enjoy these small voices I've done and please give me some critque on it. :3
02-16-2009, 06:48 AM
Like I said to you before, there were a few puffs here and there. To further enhance your voices, it would be great if you used sound effects and BGM. I realized that in one shouting line, it sounded like you were holding back(forgive me if you were supposed to). Your demo should consist of more emotion filled lines, too. Also, I think there was one line were you stumbled across your words.
Overall, it was well done but I KNOW could have been better, since I know how awesome you can be, Oua-chan. :3
02-16-2009, 01:51 PM
Yeah, I'm not really allowed to scream in this house unless everyone is gone so it was sorta hard to do the Kagura shouting line. Oh, and I stumble over a lot. XD Not just the one you found.
02-16-2009, 04:09 PM
I liked it. You did a good job.:) I felt that you were a bit too fast on some parts, more emotion is needed, and etc that Ichigo Neko already mentioned.
02-19-2009, 02:21 AM
please cut it down to less than 1:30, preferably around 1 min. Any longer and you start to lose the interest of those listening, no matter how good your voice acting is.
I really like your voice, you had good emotion in many of the takes. Obviously quality is a problem, but there are ways around it... put mic further away but speak louder (don't yell but using your diaphragm push more air out, also helps for emotion), get a pop filter, or just a circular object with holes and then put a stocking over it.
some lines seemed to have unnatural pauses, which takes the listener out of the world of your character and back into reality. Try to avoid this by making sure you get your best take in your final copy of your demo.
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