[Original] Wishing For The Night (Repost-it)

[Stray]

I had this up before, but then myw ebspace I had it stored on got all wonky, so, now I'm reposting it.

II wrote this song about meeting the love of my life. No other details outside of the song, though.

Vocals: Stray
Guitar: Newman (My father. Expert musician.)

Together.. We form "Fortune"

http://www.heavengoodbye.xoopiter.com/Stray-WishingForTheNight.mp3

Stay tuned for more song posts!

[Crimson]

Your voice teeters between notes far too often (actually it sounds like you sing the whole song kinda off). I don't know how you compose, but it might be a good idea to tune yourself to a good piano (or get someone who can play the piano to help you).
Composition wise I like it, nice and peaceful. I love composers at VACU :D.
Plus your Dad is VERY good ^_^.

[Stray]

Aye, I agree entirely with your analysis, and I must advise that was my very first song, and, in fact, we're remaking it as we speak :D