The Clown Who Wasn't Funny

[Matt Alan]

Inspired by an idea I tossed to Jot, who thought it sucked. XD But I felt like doing it myself then! This whole project took about 2 hours to write, get all the voices, and mix. Nothing spectacular here, but I find it amusing. Maybe you will too.

The Clown Who Wasn’t Funny

LINK: http://groupnetwork.com/~avamattalan/downloads/The%20Clown%20Who%20Wasn't%20Funny.zip


~CASTLIST~
(In order of appearance)

Narrator – Matt Alan
Clown – Matt Alan
Kids – Topleka
Starflare
Manami
Mom – Maria Vu
Sheriff – Matt Alan
Inmate – Matt Alan

SFX: www.sounddogs.com
Hosted: Flarey! (THANK YOU!!! XDDDD!)

[Sukisho]

umm..I can't decide if that was entertaining or scary...>.> err ya...

[Masahiko]

i think it was scary.

[Chrnogirl]

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Well.....that....was......um....some what disturbing............good acting guys.........matt....are you on crack.........I'm scared for you know.................yeah..................

[Songbird21]

I think I just agree with the others. It's scary. lol

[Tamika]

Ehhh... that was strangely amusing.

The voice acting was very, VERY good. Except I think mother dearest has caught a bit of monotone (spice it up a bit, you have a nice voice!).
Script was good, but a bit predictable. Though I like how you worked between the title and the kids/clown interaction.

Not bad. :lol:

[MariaVu]

O_O Matt....the crack gene has reached you too. The only thing I found fault in is what we all have issues with..uneven volume. Other than that...it was pure crack baby!


-Maria

[topleka]

The script was already odd when I read it. It's even stranger listening to it... O_o

[Matt Alan]

>3 ....I'm glad you all enjoyed it. Its my goal to be the mad scientist of mixing. Thank-you, Manami, Starflare, Topleka, and Maria, who gave me lines on the spot. ^^ Much appreciated.

[Bryan D]

Where do you get your drugs...and can I have some? Very...disturbing

[Loki]

The true story of Bobo The Clown. ::Lightning.::

Very well-written and the narrator sounds like he's trying to seduce you more than telling a story.

Overall, I've grown to hate clowns a lot more now.

Thanks, Matt-on-crack! XD <3

[Manami]

Oh my.....

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! XDDDD

[ClymAngus]

Your link is BuFu big boy.

[Chinomi]

:O..............

[Fade]

Like I told you on AIM...you are a twisted young man.

Pretty funny, though.

[Rikka]

I thought it was ADORABLE! XD I'll be content for the next 3 hours.

...I loved your clown and inmate voice, Mr. Matt Alan. XD

[MariaVu]

[quote="Tamika"]Ehhh... that was strangely amusing.

The voice acting was very, VERY good. Except I think mother dearest has caught a bit of monotone (spice it up a bit, you have a nice voice!).

Actually I have caught a bit of bronchitis and was amazed I could do that line in general..lol


See Matt...I knew I should have waited to record anything! :(


-Maria

[Autumn]

Positively beautiful. Matt, you are a mastermind in disguise. ^-^

Btw, the laugh at the end... that was classy.

[Ridgewolf]

It's very...unique...

Mix-wise (rythm/timing) it was pretty solid. The story seemed told 'pretty solidly' althought the content of the plot is a different matter entirely.

As for stuff-stuff, @ 1:20 it might have been cooler if that character faded with the siren. That, and the volume (blending) issues mentioned before are the biggest things I found about this piece.

That said, I think this was a success (at least for what you intended it, Matt), and a stepping stone of experience. Not bad, dude. Kudos and Dew for you in the fridge. 8)

[Matt Alan]

It's very...unique...

Mix-wise (rythm/timing) it was pretty solid. The story seemed told 'pretty solidly' althought the content of the plot is a different matter entirely.

As for stuff-stuff, @ 1:20 it might have been cooler if that character faded with the siren. That, and the volume (blending) issues mentioned before are the biggest things I found about this piece.

That said, I think this was a success (at least for what you intended it, Matt), and a stepping stone of experience. Not bad, dude. Kudos and Dew for you in the fridge. 8)

DEW! DEEEEEEEEEW! *.*....Must have the Deeeeeeeeew! *gets some irl* Muuuuch better....been a few days.

^^ Thanks for the nice review and crit, Ridge.

[still_standing2004]

This was very funny... in my opinion... in my twisted psycho opinion. I LOVE DA CLOWN!!! heh heh heh...

Great job to all the actors... yeah... I suck at comments, gomen!!

[Anonymous]

LOl wow thats all i can say lol the laugh at the end mad me laugh lol... It sounds like you totally got on some crack or went crazy lol ;)

[ClymAngus]

:? fruitloop.

[Deiji]

Oh god.. I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL I GET HOME!!!!
The craziness of Matt Alan has been unleashed! MWAHAHAAA!!! Matt Alan should be nicknamed Da Crack boy! >D
You know i love you! <3 xD
Can't wait to hear this!!!!

And i'm really sorry to hear..or read that you're sick, Maria! Get better!! <3

[Mindychan]

Errrrr..... *flops like a fish* xD

Giggle-worthy and eyebrow-raising o_O;; Hehehehehe >D (good job on the mixing though and actors were cute!)

[Steve]

That was cute! Awesomly cute. LOL!

[Ridgewolf]

@Clym: Hm...more like Grapenuts. 8)

@Deiji: Do we even want to know what you're brewing in that saucepan?

@Maria: Yes. I too am sorry to hear that you are ill. Get well soon.

[TamTu]

o.o;;;.....now I know why I didn't listen to this sooner.







but it was good, nonetheless XD

[Anonymous]

heh i thought this thread fated away or something lol

[NinjaShadowz]

ohhhh...i was wondering why this was on the first page....hahha...yea
this is one strange clip...hahaha...nice going on that Matt
even thou i havent posted ...and i listened to it last year
well..better late then never i suppose...hahah.... one weird guy that matt
:lol: <---supposed to be laughing...instend he's workin that smile

[Watercolor]

um....I"VE BEEN TRAMATIZED!

Dude, that was seriously...weird...LOL!

[Matt Alan]

>3 And my RP has been revitalized!