Sensation :: Scene 001 -- Birthing the Beautiful

[Shoji]

Presented by Iscariot en Anachronism (http://www.luvluv.net/iscariot).

Cast:
清水 "きれ" 読み帰依 [[Simizu "Kire" Yomikire]]　:: Lucien Dodge
嫜 "Swallow" 小星 [[Zhang "Swallow" Xiao-Xing]] :: Amanda Francis

Written by: Melissa Malice and Amanda Francis

BGM :: Sneaker Pimps -- Six Underground [[Two Lone Swordsmen Instrumental]]

FILE INFORMATION:
Size :: 4.8 mB
Time :: 8 minutes and 10 seconds
bitRate :: 80 kbps
URL :: p l e a s e . s a v e . a s (http://hiryuu.systemec.nl/~myth/va/sensation-001.mp3)

This is kind of an eavesdropping style thing, I think. An uncut conversation over the writing of Come and Ink. More action and crazy emo drama will be coming to this soon, but it's important to establish character relations first! *nods sagely*

NOTE: Sorry about the first line in this. My computer WOULD NOT cooperate with it so I couldn't get the noise out. >_@ *twitches*

Enjoy~

~Shoji

[Liana]

I've been listening to these productions since the first one was released, and figured it was high time I, you know, commented ^_^;;

My first thought, when I listened to your RPs, was that THIS was the sort of thing I'd want my radio-play to be. Amazing writing followed by amazing acting and wonderful mixing things. "Birthing The Beautiful" has the same effect. The imagery is just . . . vivid. Even if I'm not understanding exactly what is being talked about I can SEE it, you know? It's SO welcome when writing doesn't take a backseat in a production, especially when that writing fucking ROCKS.

The acting is just yummy. There's a certain rhythm down here that you can just LISTEN to. Like, I could put this on repeat and treat it as music. Nevermind the emotion is just THERE and both actors deliver . . . wonderfully. I'm running out of positive adjectives and too lazy to open a theasaurus, so let's just say "I liked it" and get on with life.

The only big problem I have is that Swallow is being referred to as male . . . And if he IS physically male all the way, I was really not convinced. Your voice sounds WAY too much like a girl's. So unless Swallow is transgendered or some other reason, I'd REALLY work on sounding more like a feminine male and less like a girl merely speaking with a lower voice.