COME . and . INK [[a psuedosexual nonsense essay :: MATURE]]

[Shoji]

COME . and . INK :: A psuedosexual nonsense essay, performed here today, just for you.

A production brought to you by iscariot . en . anachronism (http://www.luvluv.net/iscariot/)

Come and Ink's original text can be found here (http://www.luvluv.net/sensation/comeandink.htm) if you need to read anything to "get" it.

WARNING :: This piece contains very graphic imagery, the extraordinary phenomenon of Lucien moaning, overt references to masturbation and sexual acts, dirty words, foul language, nonsense, violence, and general creepiness.

Cast -->>
Kire :: Lucien Dodge
Swallow :: Amanda Francis

BGM -->>
"Mer Noire" from Cirque du Soleil's 'O'
"Do something" by Denali
"Nullaby" by Denali
"I want to kill you [[first degree remix]]" by Darling Violetta
"rainONE" from Cirque du Soleil's 'Varekai'
"Slip" by Schwein
"Jaya Radha" by Rasa
"Hand Rocket Numb Erone" by coAx

Written by -->>
Melissa Malice x Shoji

File Download -->> [[warning :: we're down with the f-bomb. are you?]]
Time :: 17.29 minutes//seconds
Size :: 8.4 mB
bitRate :: 64 kbps
Download :: p l e a s e . s a v e . a s (http://hiryuu.systemec.nl/~myth/mp3/come-and-ink-lo-res.mp3)

Lupin and I hope you enjoy this clip. <3 Comments and critique are appreciated. If anyone is interested in a hi-res version, gimme an IM at perVertedegOist and let me know. <3

E N J O Y !!

~Shoji

[Yami no Kitsune]

*blinks*

Wow... that was well-written, well acted and I just loved it! You're style is so different, some might say weird and twisted, but its refreshing (and I've always been fond of the weird and twisted). Metaphore after metaphore delivered brilliantly. I reeeaaally want to hear more stuff from you!!

[Matt Alan]

From the mind of a demented lunatic comes this creepy thought proviking, attention grabbing babble of nonsense that equals up to absolutely NOTHING but still keeps your attention for 18 minutes if you bothered to pay attention to the whole damn thing. XD From what I understand, Shoji has this roleplay going on somewhere with some secret elite governmental trained teamed of roleplayers who wrote up this metaphorical nonsense, and is apparently quite an interesting read. However, I've never read it, and I've heard its fricking huge anyways. >D

I understood NOTHING. There was no reason, seemingly no plot, no NOTHING.

So what WAS there here?

Some damn good acting and mixing action going on courtesy of Shoji and Lucien.

Go team! XD

[Tom]

Again, and again, and again, I escape into this delightful game of connect-the-dots, which goes far beyond the appreciation of metaphors for the sake of having metaphors. Every time. I listen. To the words.

Dot, dot, dot, dot, dot, dot... pound. POUND. POUND. There it is. Even with the indulgent 'nonlinearity.' Thinking, but listening, and let's not forget reading: The [sexy] [novel] [gritty] [moody] [sexy] [sexy] [sexy] story you present.

You know, you crazy bitch, you're putting a feather to my toes and wetting my appetite. I’ve got come and ink all over my shaking hands.

Lucien. You reserved, unassuming, sexy little chach. KISS KISS. It is with great pllleasure that I return to you, the kind words you whispered to me about my performance as DIVE. I do love your voice... it's changed so much. I have to admit, I haven't really followed much that you've been in before. But I really enjoyed your tongue-teasing, masterful delivery. This style suits you I think. I'm going to enjoy plllaying with you on Mythie Chickie's playgrrround.

Ha ha ha ha ha! Hi Myth. Should I call you Amanda? Missss Francis if I'm nasty? Raspy? ...’graspy.’ *LIX* You know I love hearing you. And reading you. And heeeaaaaring you. While reading you. You're a genie's ass.

I love the self-indulgent dip and the righteous sexuality of this, we'll call it, ‘overture,’ to the sssensuality. And girrrly, I can’t wait for the entire concerto.

As far as mixing and other production technicalities, hmmm.. I will say, "a very nice job." And leave you with that. Because I really wasn’t paying attention to THAT.

Frolic, frolic!

<3 Tom

[Jenna]

LOL this is taking the piss.
I really did not like this. Sorry. It didn't hold my attention for 1 minute, let alone 18.

I suppose it is like a piece of modern art, some people get it, others just don't. It isn't my cup of tea at all. And unlike some people, I will not pretend I understand WTF this is going on about, in an attempt to save face and look ostentatious.

I can't even comment on the acting as I don't think any actor in the world could make this make sense to me.

[Shoji]

Kitsune :: I'm glad that you liked it, and appreciated it for what it was. <3

Tom :: You're so kink, love. <3 Thanks for the compliments, you majesty. You're far too gracious for your own good. <3

Jenna :: I'm glad that you were honest about it. Too many people have gushed jizz all over this piece, just to make themselves seem smarter by liking what they don't understand. You know? I admit, doing this piece was a risk, especially with an untargeted audience. And besides, Jenna. You don't need to pretend, in order to be ostentatious. You're the best in the woooorld and you deserve all the arrogance you put out. ^_~ j/k <3<3

Thanks for the comments. <3 XD

~Shoji

[ClymAngus]

COME . and . INK :: A psuedosexual nonsense essay, performed here today, just for you.

A production brought to you by iscariot . en . anachronism (http://www.luvluv.net/iscariot/)

~Shoji

Oooo, a link. <click> AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH STRIPPPPPPEEEEEYYYYYYYY!!!! BLIND! <weedles around desk> CCccccAAAAnnnnTT seeeeee! <Crack! Flomp!> mmmooaaannn.............

<one slow recovery later.........>

To use your own pallette as critic, there are somethings that should be, and there are others that should be part 3. But don't let that stop you, do for art what Dr Joseph Mengele did for science, at least it'll be a good show.

Technically your both popping like demons, (and the first person to say that was intended to help express the falsity of the mediums capacity to contain the rawness of the performance, gets a slap) There is no excuse for shoddy workmanship. Other than that competently put together sounds like you had fun, which at the end of the day is all that really counts.