Gintama 'Pray' opening song

[Cerise Panda]

Hello all!

This is my first compilation, the opening theme to Gintama 'Pray'.
I'm not the best j-pop singer, but I really love this song and I thought I'd give it a shot at fandubbing it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7FGs3tK3RWU

I had a lot of difficulty trying to fit the words to the songs and I understand that it's pretty hard to understand the lyrics.

Feedback is appreciated!

[VoiceVSP]

Pretty neat job! I'll be honest, the lyrics could use a bit of tweaking, but you could probably find some people who can help with that no problem. But, great job! Kudos.

[Dinkar]

It sounds like you lost your breath a few times, but that's probably a diaphragm issue. One question; Do you sit when you sing? If you do, I would try standing while you record a song; It gives you better control over your diaphragm, which equals more emotion and less shortness of breath.

[yukie]

I love your voice! It's so sweet *_* The lyrics are cute (:

[andy ichigo]

That opera training definately came in handy though~

Amazing job, just work on clarity.